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The given chart elucidates the data of people aged between 18 and 55 + who faces difficulties when they move to abroad.

The given chart elucidates the data of people aged between 18 and 55 + who faces difficulties when they move to abroad. Jlk9B
The given chart elucidates the data of people aged between 18 and 55 + who faces difficulties when they move to abroad. Overall, what stands out from the chart is that most of the youngsters find difficult to find accommodation and new friends in abroad countries, while aged people having difficulty to learn the local tongue. To commence with, almost 40% of age group between 18 and 34 find difficult to locate a place to live in foreign countries and 46% of youngsters facing the problem of making new friends in abroad. However, quite less than one-third of total youngsters facing difficulties in coping with the local language. In addition, merely same percentage of mature people aged between 35 and 54 find difficulties in learning the local language, finding place to live and making new friends. Additionally, slightly more than half of the total people of age 55 and over find difficult to learn the local tongue, whereas almost a quater of percentage of old people facing difficulties in finding accommodation and making new friends.
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difficulties
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local
language, finding place to
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people
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IELTS academic The given chart elucidates the data of people aged between 18 and 55 + who faces difficulties when they move to abroad.

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6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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