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The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household

The pie charts illustrate the percentages of households energy consumption and the rate of greenhouse gas evaporates through them in Australia. Overall, heating shares the major proportion of household energy in Australia. The highest co2 gas creates by water heating. According to the first chat, over two fifths of energy consumption shares by heating. While water heating reports 30%, it's clear that all other appliances portion half a percentage of their. Moreover, 7% of power use for refrigeration and below 5% energy allocates from lighting (4%) and cooling (2%). In addition, almost a third proportion of greenhouse gas create through the water heating, and all other appliances generate over a quarter proportion of co2. Nevertheless, through heating and regeneration also almost 30% of greenhouse gas share to the atmosphere. It shows that, the most eco friendly residential system is cooling. it only produces 3% of co2.
The pie charts illustrate the percentages of households
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energy
consumption and the rate of greenhouse
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gas
evaporates through them in Australia.

Overall
,
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heating
shares the major proportion of household
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energy
in Australia. The highest co2
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gas
creates by water heating.

According to the
first
chat, over two fifths of
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energy
consumption shares by
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heating
. While water
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heating
reports 30%, it's
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clear
that all other appliances portion half a percentage of their.
Moreover
, 7% of power
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use
for refrigeration and below 5%
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energy
allocates from lighting (4%) and cooling (2%).

In addition
, almost a third proportion of greenhouse
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gas
create through the water
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heating
, and all other appliances generate over a quarter proportion of co2.
Nevertheless
, through
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heating
and regeneration
also
almost 30% of greenhouse
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gas
share to the atmosphere. It
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shows
that, the most
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eco friendly
residential system is cooling.
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it
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produces 3% of co2.
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IELTS academic The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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