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The diagram shows how ethanol fuel was produced from corn.

The diagram shows one of the particular ways of producing ethanol fuel from corn. Overall, the process consists of 8 stages commencing with storing corn and ends with transporting it for usage. First of all, corn was places in storage, next, it was followed by a milling process, then water was added to it and it was cooked for 4 hours. Next stage was fermenting which takes 48 hours. The following stage starts when it was separated to solid and liquid. Afterwards, ethanol was purified for 5 hours. Moreover, pure ethanol was stored again and finally, it was ready to transport for usage.

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 one of the particular ways of producing ethanol fuel from corn. Overall
, the process consists of 8 stages commencing with storing corn and ends with transporting it for usage.

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starts
 when it was separated
 to solid and liquid. Afterwards, ethanol was purified
 for 5 hours. Moreover
, pure ethanol was stored
 again and finally
, it was ready to transport for usage. 