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The diagrams show the site if school in 2004 and it is plane to change in school site in 2024

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The provided diagrams illustrate the information about the previous structure of School for 600 students in 2004 and it is expected to some major changes occurring in the scholl design for 1000 students in 2024. Overall, there is predicted some important changes in the school structure for increase number of pupils. In 2004, there were two school buildings, which was separated by path way. The big sport field was located toward north side and only one car park area which was placed at west northern site. Supurpsingly, in 2024, there is expected to replace the area of sport field and also size of sport area decreases, which will be build in rectangular shape. Meanwhile, north site, it is predicted to build one more building and new section of car park for 1000 students. Previously two school building will be joined with corridor and decrease the area of path way. There is forecasted the extend of road and join with main road to car park section 2.
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decreases, which will be build in rectangular shape. Meanwhile, north site, it
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