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Comparing A town in two periods of time

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These two maps provide some information about the changes which have taken place in the town of Kimsville since 2002. Overall, what stands out is Kimsville has developed significantly, and it has been modernized during this period. The only features which are still the same are the trees in the northeast and southeast of the city, and the shopping center, which is located in the north of this map. However, lots of development can be seen in the picture on the right side. One of the notable changes which has occurred is the increase in the number of buildings. For instance, some new apartments have been constructed in the northwest of the city. Furthermore, some other buildings have been built in the east of the city, in order to introduce a software company. If we look at the south of the city, the old cinema has been knocked down to make way for a pub. Moreover, a plethora of trees have been cut down to build a football stadium. A final change is the new train station, which is near the city center.
These two maps provide
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information about the
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which have taken place in the town of
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Kimsville
since 2002.

Overall
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Kimsville
has developed
significantly
, and it has
been modernized
during this period.

The
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only
features which are
still
the same are the trees in the northeast and southeast of the city, and the shopping center, which
is located
in the north of this map.

However
, lots of development can be
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seen
in the picture on the right side. One of the notable
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changes
which has occurred is the increase in the number of buildings.
For instance
,
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some
new apartments have
been constructed
in the northwest of the city.
Furthermore
,
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some
other buildings have
been built
in the east of the city, in order to introduce a software
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company
. If we look at the south of the city, the
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old
cinema has
been knocked
down to
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make
way for a pub.
Moreover
, a plethora of trees have been
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cut
down to build a football stadium. A final
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change
is the new train station, which is near the city center.
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