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The bar chart compares urban population increase in 3 regions and in the whole world in 1950, 2000, and projected growth by 2030.

The bar chart compares urban population increase in 3 regions and in the whole world in 1950, 2000, and projected growth by 2030. r6A9L
The bar chart compares urban population increase in 3 regions and in the whole world in 1950, 2000, and projected growth by 2030. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the percentage of urban population rose in all 3 different countries, and the whole world starting from 1950 and until 2000. It is forecast to rise further by 2030. In 1950, the proportion of urban residents in the world stood at 30 percent, but by 2000 almost half of the world’s population lived in centres. Moreover, the figure is expected to rise to 60 percent in 2030 respectively. Latin America had the highest proportion of people living in towns and cities, increasing from about 40 percent in 1950 to 70 percent in 2000, with a predicted further rise to 80 percent in 2030. The figures and trends for Africa and Asia are similar. In Africa, the percentage of urban dwellers occupied about 11 percent, compared with 12 percent in Asia. This figure increased to almost 40 percent in both continents in 2000. By 2030, the figures are projected to reach 50 percent in Africa and more than half of the residents lived in Asia.
The bar chart compares
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population increase in 3 regions and in the whole
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in 1950, 2000, and projected growth by 2030.

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that the percentage of
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population rose in all 3
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different
countries, and the whole
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starting from 1950 and until 2000. It is forecast to rise
further
by 2030.

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residents in the
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stood at 30
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,
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by 2000 almost half of the
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population
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in 2030
respectively
. Latin America had the highest proportion of
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people
living in towns and cities, increasing from about 40
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in 1950 to 70
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in 2000, with a predicted
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in 2030.

The
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and trends for Africa and Asia are similar. In Africa, the percentage of
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dwellers occupied about 11
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, compared with 12
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in Asia. This
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increased to almost 40
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in both continents in 2000. By 2030, the
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are projected
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in Africa and more than half of the residents
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lived
in Asia.
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IELTS academic The bar chart compares urban population increase in 3 regions and in the whole world in 1950, 2000, and projected growth by 2030.

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