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Overall, while an upward trend was seen in the percentage of university students in countries A and D, the proportion of college students in countries B and C remained almost unchanged.

Overall, while an upward trend was seen in the percentage of university students in countries A and D, the proportion of college students in countries B and C remained almost unchanged. eAOWO

• The line graph given illustrates how much paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood was produced in the UK within 20 years, starting from 1980. • Overall, while the amount of paper produced increased significantly, sawn-wood production saw a dramatic reduction. Meanwhile, a fluctuant trend was recorded in the volume of wood pulp produced. • In 1980, the quantity of paper produced in the UK was approximately 230 million tonnes. This figure rose to exactly 350 million tonnes by the end of the period. An opposite downward trend was seen in the production of sawn-wood, which declined from 200 million tonnes by about 70 million tonnes throughout the period examined. • At the beginning of the period, the production of wood pulp in the UK was in the neighborhood of 170 million tonnes. This figure decreased to 150 million tonnes in 1990 before rising to about 160 million tonnes by the end of the survey.

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