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The diagram outlines one particular way of creating ceramic pots.

The diagram outlines one particular way of creating ceramic pots. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that this chemical process can be grouped into three main stages: collecting the raw materials, forming those materials into pots, and finishing the process by heating and colouring them. The first stage of the process is to dig up and transport the raw materials to factories where they are then crushed and mixed with water to make them into a clay-like substance that can be molded into the shape of a pot. From there, they must dry for 4-6 hours in moulds in order to fix them into their final shape. They are then placed in an oven and heated to over 1000 degrees celsius. Following this, the pots are colored and a ‘firing’ stage in the oven sets the paint pigments in place, finalising the process.
The diagram outlines one particular way of creating ceramic
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pots
. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is
readily
apparent that this chemical
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process
can
be grouped
into three main stages: collecting the raw materials, forming those materials into
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pots
, and finishing the
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process
by heating and
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colouring
them.

The
first
stage of the
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process
is to dig up and transport the raw materials to factories where they are then crushed and mixed with water to
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make
them into a clay-like substance that can
be molded
into the shape of a
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pot
. From there, they
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must
dry for 4-6 hours in
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moulds
in order to
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fix
them into their final shape.

They are then placed in an oven and heated to over 1000 degrees
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celsius
. Following this, the
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pots
are colored
and a ‘firing’ stage in the oven sets the paint pigments in place,
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finalising
the
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process
.
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IELTS academic The diagram outlines one particular way of creating ceramic pots.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
146 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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