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The diagram below shows how to change a tyre.

The diagram below shows how to change a tyre. obWBX
The diagram portrays the process of changing a tyre when it happens to run over broken glass. Overall, the diagram consists of 5 steps, starting from finding a place to park to cleaning up the materials used in the process. First of all, to ensure the safety of other citizens, the car should be parked at a safe place and the hazard lights must be on. When the car is parked safely, the most important materials needed to change the deflated tyre are a spare tyre, jack, and wrench. After gathering the materials, remove the hubcap and use a wrench to loosen the wheel nuts. Next, use the jack to level the height to 15cms. Then the wheel nuts can be entirely removed. Once the nuts are removed, the deflated tyre can be pulled out and be replaced with the spare tyre. After it is replaced, the wheel nuts should be placed back and slightly tightened. In this step, the jack can decrease the height and be removed. Following this, each wheel nut should be tightened halfway and continue until they are completely tightened. Finally, everything should be put away and leave no traces on the side of the road.
The diagram portrays the process of changing a
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tyre
when it happens to run over broken glass.

Overall
, the diagram consists of 5 steps, starting from finding a place to park to cleaning up the materials
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used
in the process.

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First of all
, to ensure the safety of other citizens, the car should
be parked
at a safe place and the hazard lights
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must
be on. When the car
is parked
safely
, the most
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important
materials needed to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the deflated
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tyre
are a spare
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tyre
, jack, and wrench. After gathering the materials, remove the hubcap and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
a wrench to loosen the
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wheel
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nuts
.
Next
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the jack to level the height to 15cms. Then the
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wheel
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nuts
can be
entirely
removed.

Once the
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nuts
are removed
, the deflated
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tyre
can
be pulled
out and
be replaced
with the spare
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tyre
. After it
is replaced
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wheel
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nuts
should
be placed
back and
slightly
tightened. In this step, the jack can decrease the height and
be removed
. Following this, each
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wheel
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nut
should
be tightened
halfway and continue until they are completely tightened.
Finally
, everything should
be put
away and
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leave
no traces on the side of the road.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how to change a tyre.

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200 words
6.0
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