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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

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The given diagram illustrates the process of instant noodles production. Overall, there are eight main steps of manufacturing instant noodles, which start from moving flour that keeps in the storage silos until this product labelled and sealed in the final step. As the first step, flour is transported from storage silos to the mixing machine by trucks. After it reached the machine, flour is mixed with water and oil and then circulated through rollers and dough sheets to make it become straight shapes prior to altered to strips in dough strips. After it passed the dough strips, this mixing changed to noodle discs and then fried and dried respectively previously it is filled to the cups. After the process of noodles cupping finished, the next step is adding the cups of noodles with vegetables and spices, and then, as the final steps, the cups have flowed to the labelling and sealing process.
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diagram illustrates the process of instant
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noodles
production.
Overall
, there are eight main
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steps
of manufacturing instant
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noodles
, which
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start
from moving flour that
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keeps
in the storage silos until this product labelled and sealed in the final step.

As the
first
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step
, flour
is transported
from storage silos to the mixing machine by trucks. After it reached the machine, flour
is mixed
with water and oil and then circulated through rollers and dough sheets to
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make
it become straight shapes prior to altered to strips in dough strips. After it passed the dough strips, this mixing
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changed
to
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noodle
discs and then fried and dried
respectively
previously it
is filled
to the cups.

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After
the process of
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noodles
cupping finished, the
next
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step
is adding the cups of
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noodles
with vegetables and spices, and then, as the final
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steps
, the cups have flowed to the labelling and sealing process.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

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