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the chart shows the visitors to four European nations

the chart shows the visitors to four European nations aQWPo

The given bar chart manifests the number of predicted travelers from the US, Canada and Mexico to visit the famous cities including Roma, Marid, Paris and Liverpool in the year 2018. From an overall perspective, the best-case scenario was seen in the number of American tourists in 4 locations while Mexican travelers account for the least. It is clearly evident that the American visitors account for the highest number in all four cities in 2018, while the Mexican travelers make up the lowest number in almost all cities except for Paris during the same year. According to the chart, Marid is the most attractive place for American visitors, about 100 thousand people, the figure for Roma is about 20% lower. The number of Canadian and Mexican visiting Marid are approximately 80 and 70 thousand people, respectively, while the figures for Roma are roughly 50 and 20 thousand, correspondingly. Regarding the remaining cities, the number of American, Canadian and Mexican people visiting Paris fluctuate slightly between 62 and 64 thousand people, whilst the figures for Liverpool are around 50, 30 and 19 thousand people in the same period shown.

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