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Procedure to get a driving license

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The diagram illustrates how to obtain a driving license Overall, a candidate have to go through 3 terms including a vision test, written exam and road exam, before getting the driving license. To begin with, customers ought to go to the driving license center and fill in the forms. . An eye test will be administered right after that, its result will decide whether they are qualified to get the license or notAfter passing the vision check, candidates are required to pay wage for having the written exam. The penned evaluation can be taken 3 time for the same fee
The diagram illustrates how to obtain a driving
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IELTS academic Procedure to get a driving license

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
99 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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