Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002. XXVq
The bar chart illustrates the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with: well-knownwell-known sports activity played by boys and girls in New Zealand during the year 2002. Overall, from the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with: accordedgiven statics it clearly This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with: demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplaysshows that the netball is most This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with: approacharrivecome a game among girls and for the boys the soccer is the common game. According to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with: accordedgiven figure 25 per cent of girls Possible agreement error. Did you mean "plays"? (Some collective nouns can be treated as both singular and plural, so 'play' is not always incorrect. )playsplays netball as their Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English. favoritefavourite game. Next to that is swimming is the second most popular game among girls group which is around 23 per cent. The least Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English. favoritefavourite game is Possible spelling mistake found. cricketcircletcricket and martial arts which are around 1 per cent and 4 per cent respectively. In the case of boys soccer is most played among them which is Possible spelling mistake found. approximatelyapproximately 25 per cent and after that boys are most interested in other sports activity which is about 16 per cent. The least interesting sports activity is netball Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis((1 per cent) which is double halves lesser percentage of girls. In the case of martial arts(10 per cent) and Possible spelling mistake found. cricketcircletcricket Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis((11 per cent) boys have more Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English. favoritefavouritegame than girls.
The bar chart illustrates
Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only "the" or "This" is left.
the This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
phrase/word
is too simple and can
be replaced
with:
Possible spelling mistake found.
well-knownwell-known
sports activity played by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
boys
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
girls
in New Zealand during the year 2002.
Overall
, from
Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only "the" or "This" is left.
the This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
phrase/word
(depending on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
context)
can be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
potentially
replaced with:
Possible spelling mistake found.
accordedgiven
statics it
clearly
This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
phrase/word
(depending on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
context)
can be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
potentially
replaced with:
Possible spelling mistake found.
demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplaysshows
that the netball is most This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
phrase/word
(depending on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
context)
can be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
potentially
replaced with:
Possible spelling mistake found.
approacharrivecome
a game among
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
girls
and for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
boys
the soccer is the common game.

According to
Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only "the" or "This" is left.
the This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
phrase/word
(depending on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
context)
can be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
potentially
replaced with:
Possible spelling mistake found.
accordedgiven
figure 25 per cent of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
girls
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Possible
agreement error. Did you mean
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
plays
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
? (
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
collective nouns can
be treated
as both singular and plural,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
'play' is not always incorrect.
Loose punctuation mark.
)
Possible spelling mistake found.
playsplays
netball as their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Possible
spelling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mistake
. '
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
favourite
' is British English.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
favoritefavourite
game.
Next
to
that is
swimming is the second most popular game among
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
girls
group which is around 23 per cent. The least
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Possible
spelling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mistake
. '
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
favourite
' is British English.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
favoritefavourite
game is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Possible
spelling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mistake
found.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
cricketcircletcricket
and martial arts which are around 1 per cent and 4 per cent
respectively
.

In the case of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
boys
soccer is most played among them which is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Possible
spelling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mistake
found.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
approximatelyapproximately
25 per cent and after that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
boys
are most interested in other sports activity which is about 16 per cent. The least interesting sports activity is netball Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis
Unpaired symbol: ')' seems to be missing
(
(1 per cent) which is double halves lesser percentage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
girls
. In the case of martial arts(10 per cent) and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Possible
spelling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mistake
found.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
cricketcircletcricket
Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis
Unpaired symbol: ')' seems to be missing
(
(11 per cent)
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
boys
have more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Possible
spelling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mistake
. '
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
favourite
' is British English.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
favoritefavouritegame
than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
girls
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
300 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.