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Some people think that education is important to get jobs while others believe it is experience and skills .discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people think that education is important to get jobs while others believe it is experience and skills. discuss both views and give your opinion Awole
Few masses believe that education play an important role to get employee while on the other side few people think it is get experience and skills for doing and job. here i would discuss about both of the views in upcoming paragraphs. Education play a vital role in all lifes. when some one an educated its easly to get the job any where like as a school, hospitals, any other institution etc. when the people were educated then they advice the other to do something in their life. when the person was confused in his future planning. they were go to the educate person for get some information about the future planning. example, some time few masses recently complete their 10 class exam. they were confused to choice their stream for the further higher education and they also wanted go the educated person which was as some knowledge about the stream. While, a few peopl believe it is easier to get a job by experience and skills. experience and skills were also important for doing any work. when someone was not get any skill they cannot do anything in rightway. when some people works in hospital they were all educated or experienced for how can do their treatment and taken care. experience and skill person was holdhouse, elders, etc they were ideas to get do good job by experience or skill. To put it in nutshell, i personaly partially agree with given statement. education is important in everyone's life while experience and skills were must also important to get job to anywhere like as dancing, , they were do by the experience or skills
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IELTS academic Some people think that education is important to get jobs while others believe it is experience and skills. discuss both views and give your opinion

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