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Some people believe that children should assist with household chores when they are old enough Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this Please provide specific reasons details and examples to support your response

Some people believe that children should assist with household chores when they are old enough Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this Please provide specific reasons details and examples to support your response lj1NW
Nowadays, many parents believe when children are old enough, they should assist in household chores, while many others think their little ones are too young to take on responsibilities like adults. With me, I support the first point of view because of three main reasons: it gives children opportunities to get used to family’s daily activities, learn to respect other people’s effort, and become more independent in their future lives. First of all, children need to take part in daily household tasks to understand how things work. In fact, one of the most frequently sites causes of over-indulgent parents are doing too much for their children and not expecting enough from them. Not being taught essential skills of everyday living can limit children’s ability to function at age appropriate level. For instance, a three-year old girl has no idea how to wear her coat or even pour water by herself, or a teenager at his eighteenth go away for college can’t do his own laundry. In contrast, youngsters are completely capable to assist their parents in many chores; cooking is one example. They can help by cleaning ingredients, giving needed things or setting the dining table. Observing and direct participating in cooking, they learn how foods are made, and can cook simple dishes by themselves. Clearly, let children take part in household activities will cultivate their knowledge about the real life and help them build skills they will need as grown-ups. Secondly, being shared household chores gives kids the opportunity to give back, value, and respect their parents and all they do for them. Some parents rarely require children to help because of many different reasons such as: they are so busy with all other demands from schoolwork, need to pursue extra-curricular sports or need to practice a new instrument… As a result, children deem that their academic qualifications, athletic skills or interest are most important. Intentionally or not, these kids become self-absorbed and mainly concern about themselves and their own needs. They do not naturally consider the needs and expectations of others, include their parents. Doing chores teaches kids how are caring, sharing and respect. For kids in the previous example, when they aware how hard and time-consuming cooking take their mothers, they can value the job and who did it. So, kids learn to respect every dish, never refuse eating them anymore and willingly help not only in cooking, but in other chores also. Last but not least, I think each children should have his/her own contributions in household tasks because childhood is an important period to form a child’s character. When they can do something, even small tasks to help their parents, they will feel like being a vital part in the family and have duty to contribute more. In fact, learning to schedule time and be responsible in doing chores from early age help kids build “a lasting sense of mastery, responsibility and self-reliance”, achieve early success at school, and in career than those who didn’t or started them as teens, according to researches by Marty Rossmann, emeritus professor at the University of Minnesota. For example, when a preschooler is divided tasks like other members, she will feel having the same role and responsibility with her siblings or her parents. She have to throw the trash, tidy up her bedroom, gather and put away toys after playing by herself. By that, she learns how to be in charge of her own agenda, how to develop her own interests, skills, solutions and expertise, then she becomes more independent at her study and in her future life. In conclusion, for all the reasons above, I strongly support that children should assist parents with suitable household chores as soon as they are old enough. Because of being small, children can do small tasks, but after all, they gain a lot of necessary knowledge and skills to prepare for an adult’s life, three of which are: awareness about the real world, how to respect other people, and live independently by their own.
Nowadays,
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, they should assist in
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household
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, while
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ones are too young to take on responsibilities like adults. With me, I support the
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of three main reasons: it gives
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children
opportunities to
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get
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used
to family’s daily activities,
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learn
to
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respect
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other
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people
’s effort, and become more independent in their future
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lives
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,
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children
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need
to
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take part
in daily
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household
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tasks
to understand how things work. In fact, one of the most
frequently
sites causes of over-indulgent
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parents
are doing too much for their
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children
and not expecting
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enough
from them. Not
being taught
essential
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skills
of everyday living can limit
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children’s
ability to function at age appropriate level.
For instance
, a three-year
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old
girl has no
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idea
how to wear her coat or even pour water by herself, or a
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teenager
at his eighteenth go away for college can’t do his
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own
laundry.
In contrast
, youngsters are completely capable to assist their
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parents
in
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many
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chores
; cooking is one example. They can
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help
by cleaning ingredients, giving needed things or setting the dining table. Observing and direct participating in cooking, they
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learn
how foods
are made
, and can cook simple dishes by themselves.
Clearly
,
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let
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children
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take part
in
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household
activities will cultivate their knowledge about the real life and
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help
them build
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skills
they will
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need
as grown-ups.

Secondly
,
being shared
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household
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chores
gives
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kids
the opportunity to give back, value, and
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respect
their
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parents
and all they do for them.
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parents
rarely require
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to
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help
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because
of
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reasons such as: they are
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busy with all
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other
demands from schoolwork,
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need
to pursue extra-curricular sports or
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need
to practice a new instrument…
As a result
,
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children
deem that their academic qualifications, athletic
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skills
or interest are most
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important
.
Intentionally
or not, these
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kids
become self-absorbed and
mainly
concern about themselves and their
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own
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needs
. They do not
naturally
consider the
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needs
and expectations of others, include their
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parents
. Doing
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chores
teaches
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kids
how are caring, sharing and
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respect
. For
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kids
in the previous example, when they aware how
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hard
and time-consuming cooking take their mothers, they can value the job and who did it.
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So
,
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kids
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learn
to
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respect
every dish, never refuse eating them anymore and
willingly
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help
not
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only
in cooking,
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in
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chores
also
.

Last
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not least, I
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each
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children
should have his/her
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own
contributions in
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household
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tasks
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because
childhood is an
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important
period to form a child’s character. When they can do something, even
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small
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tasks
to
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help
their
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parents
, they will feel like being a vital part in the family and have duty to contribute more. In fact, learning to schedule time and be responsible in doing
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chores
from early age
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help
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kids
build “a lasting sense of mastery, responsibility and self-reliance”, achieve early success at school, and in career than those who didn’t or
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started
them as teens, according to researches by Marty
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Rossmann
, emeritus professor at the University of Minnesota.
For example
, when a preschooler
is divided
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tasks
like
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other
members, she will feel having the same role and responsibility with her siblings or her
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parents
. She
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have
to throw the trash, tidy up her bedroom, gather and put away toys after playing by herself. By that, she
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learns
how to be in charge of her
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own
agenda, how to develop her
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own
interests,
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skills
, solutions and expertise, then she becomes more independent at her study and in her future life.

In conclusion
, for all the reasons above, I
strongly
support that
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children
should assist
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parents
with suitable
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household
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tasks
,
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after all
, they gain
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a lot of
necessary knowledge and
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skills
to prepare for an adult’s life, three of which are: awareness about the real world, how to
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respect
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other
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people
, and
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live
independently
by their
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own
.
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