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Physical activities of male and females from different age categories

Physical activities of male and females from different age categories NVWQW

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of daily physical activities of males and females from different age groups from 15 to 65 and over in 2010. Overall, The predominant regular exercise or activities of male age groups are young adults. Meanwhile, the least rate is from mid-aged men. On the other hand, the peak ratio is from females aged 45 and 54. Firstly, delve deeper into a male section where the highest ratio of 52. 8 percent recorded between 15 and 24 millennials, and it is gradually decreased to 39. 5 in the age 35-44. However, it climbs slightly to 43. 1, and it ends in little higher notes, which is 46. 7 in the age 65 and above. Secondly, when it comes to females, The proportion starts at 47. 7 in teenagers, and the ratio constantly leaped to 53. 3, which is noted as highest among the two genders. Surprisingly, the greater percentage is from the mid-range female whose age is from 45 to 54. Even though it was at its peak earlier, but it closed at 47. 1 percent at the end, which is almost equal to male aged people.

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