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mobile phones versus landline phones

mobile phones versus landline phones MrnaQ

The bar chart highlights data about number of phones and landlines per 100 people in the USA, Canada and five distinct European countries. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that the total number of phones per 100 people is highest in Denmark and lowest in Canada. Besides that, there are generally more mobile, than landline users. In the USA and Canada, the usage of landlines if far more preferred, than that of the mobiles. The figures show, that taking 100 Canadians, around 40 of them will have a mobile and over 60 will have a landline. The same trend applies to the USA, where nearly 50 people have a mobile and about 70 of them have a landline. A different pattern can be observed when looking at European countries. Taken any of them, the number of mobile owners will oscillate between 70 and 90 per 100, the landlines however, vary between 40 and 70 per 100 depending on the country. The only exception is Denmark, where the number of citizens using both devices is around 85 per 100, with a slight advantage of the landlines.

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