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map below is the town of Garlsdon

map below is the town of Garlsdon 2rQAo
The map illustrates two possible locations for new supermarket in the town of Garlsdon. Overall, the town garlsdon has 65000 inhabitants and two sites planned in the town are situated in further places. First possible supermarket location is in outside of the housing area. Its located in the countryside, between main road to the east and railway to the west. On the other hand, second supermarket location is situated inside the housing area. Furthermore, its placed in town centre which has no traffic zone. On the west side of the second supermarket site there is industry located, on the north side railways running through it. In this second supermarkets location its close to three other towns which are, hindon on the north west side (12km), Cransdon on the south east side (25 km), Bransdon on th south west side (16 km). Each three town has different populations Hindon 10000, Bransdon 15000 and Cransdon 29. 000
The map illustrates two possible
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locations
for new supermarket in the
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town
of
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Garlsdon
.
Overall
, the
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town
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garlsdon
has 65000 inhabitants and two sites planned in the
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town
are situated
in
further
places.

First
possible supermarket
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location
is in
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outside of
the housing area. Its located in the countryside, between main road to the east and railway to the west.

On the other hand
, second supermarket
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location
is situated
inside the housing area.
Furthermore
, its placed in
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town
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centre
which has no traffic zone. On the west side of the second supermarket site there is industry located, on the north side railways running through it. In this second
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supermarkets
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location
its close to three other
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towns
which are,
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hindon
on the
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north west
side (
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12km
),
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Cransdon
on the
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south east
side (25 km),
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Bransdon
on
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th
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south west
side (16 km). Each three
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town
has
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different
populations
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Hindon
10000,
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Bransdon
15000 and
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Cransdon
29. 000
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IELTS academic map below is the town of Garlsdon

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6.0
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