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Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions. gwb7
The two maps indicate the main changes which have taken place in the town of Kimsville between the year 2002 and today. According to the map that represents the Kimsville of 2002, the city centre was in the middle of the town and factory was in the right side of it. More trees were visible in this graph and the old cinema and shopping center were two most significant establishments in this time. Today, the map of Kimsville has changed a lot including the new high rising apartments, train station and football stadium. The old cinema hall building was transformed in to a pub while a larger cinema hall was established. The city centre and shopping centre remained at the same locations while the number of trees has decreased now. The new football stadium and apartments occupied the places where more trees were present in 2002. Overall, It is noticed that Kimsville has become much more modern city, with more buildings and transport facilities.
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which have taken place in the town of
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Kimsville
between the year 2002 and
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today
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According to the map that represents the
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Kimsville
of 2002, the city
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centre
was in the middle of the town and factory was
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in the right side
of it. More trees were visible in this graph and the
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old
cinema and shopping center were two most significant establishments in this time.

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Today
, the map of
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Kimsville
has
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changed
a lot including the new high rising apartments, train station and football stadium. The
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old
cinema hall building
was transformed
in to a pub while a larger cinema hall
was established
. The city
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centre
and shopping
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centre
remained at the same locations while the number of trees has decreased
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now
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The
new football stadium and apartments occupied the places where more trees were present in 2002.

Overall
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is noticed
that
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Kimsville
has become much more modern city, with more buildings and transport facilities.
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IELTS academic Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

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