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Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions. NRy2
The given diagram presents steps involved in the process of making tomato ketchup are portrayed The first main step is the careful selection of the tomatoes at the sorting station, which is succeeded by tomato harvesting. Good quality tomatoes are sent to the ketchup factory, where their skin is peeled, then seeds are removed, and stalks are detached. These are collected in a container to alter its consistency. At that time the pulp thus obtained is boiled under controlled temperature to a specific period of time. Prior to the boiling process, sugar, vinegar, and salt are added to this mixture in the correct proportion. The post boiled mixture is left undisturbed for about two hours to set itself in an appropriate stage to become ‘tomato ketchup’, and this is filled in individual bottles. The evenly filled bottles are labelled and sent for packing before quality assurance. The next stage is distribution, where it reaches supermarkets and other outlets and eventually to individual customers. The final step is that you buy a bottle of tomatoes ketchup and enjoy with hamburger and fries.
The
given
diagram presents steps involved in the process of making tomato
ketchup
are portrayed


The
first
main step is the careful selection of the tomatoes at the sorting station, which
is succeeded
by tomato harvesting.
Good
quality tomatoes are
sent
to the
ketchup
factory, where their skin
is peeled
, then seeds
are removed
, and stalks
are detached
. These
are collected
in a container to alter its consistency. At that time the pulp
thus
obtained
is boiled
under controlled temperature to a specific period of time. Prior to the boiling process, sugar, vinegar, and salt are
added
to this mixture in the correct proportion. The post boiled mixture is
left
undisturbed for about two hours to set itself in an appropriate stage to become ‘tomato
ketchup’
, and this
is filled
in individual bottles. The
evenly
filled bottles
are labelled
and
sent
for packing
before
quality assurance.
The
next
stage is distribution, where it reaches supermarkets and other outlets and
eventually
to individual customers.
The
final step is that you
buy
a bottle of tomatoes
ketchup
and enjoy with hamburger and fries.
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IELTS academic Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

Academic
  American English
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181 words
6.0
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