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English language fundamentals

English language fundamentals 2rqy6

As seen in the pie graph the fundamentals of the english language are explained. Despite the huge differences between the English language and the French or Latin, English contains of 28% of French and the same protion of Latin. Not to mention that German is also a huge parameter here in the English language, duo to this reason, A lot of german contains English words and vice versa, in fact 26% of English are German words.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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 in the pie graph the fundamentals of the Possible spelling mistake found.English
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IELTS academic English language fundamentals

Academic

American English

1 paragraphs

76 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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