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The table below gives statistics about the size of US households over a number of years. (Household = all the people living together in one house.) Study the information and answer the question.

The table below gives statistics about the size of US households over a number of years. (Household = all the people living together in one house. ) Study the information and answer the question. x0OAw
The table illustrates the statistic size of US households which means all the people living together in 1 house over a number of years. In a overview, the number of house holds in the year 1790 were 35. 8% for the 7 person with the highest range among others and thier was a slight fluctuation in the year 1890 with dip of 23% respectively. However, by 1990 their is a drastic change which decline the percent distribution with least at 1. 4% and a rise in 1 and 2 person which is 24. 6% and 32. 2% highest among all respectively.
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over a number of years. In
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holds in the year 1790 were 35. 8% for the 7 person with the highest range among others and
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which decline the percent distribution with least at 1. 4% and a rise in 1 and 2
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