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The maps illustrate how an island has changed after the construction of some tourist facilities to make it more attractive for visiting. The island has an area of around 100km square with palm trees on the land area. On the beginning, the island was surrounded by sea on two sides and a beach area on the west end. However, after the emerge of tourists, there are many new changes. The beach is now being utilized for swimming, moreover there are many rooms built for the guests. It also has a reception area at the center with a restaurant immediately behind it. The sea on the south end is now being used for boat rides with the new built tier. In summary, even though the palm trees stayed in place without any new arrangements, the island now has many more facilities than it has before making the area to be more suitable for tourists.
The maps illustrate how an
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tourist facilities to
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make
it more attractive for visiting.

The
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100km
square with palm trees on the land
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. On the beginning, the
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was surrounded
by sea on two sides and a beach
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on the west
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However
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the emerge
of tourists, there are
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new
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. The beach is
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being utilized
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rooms built for the guests. It
also
has a reception
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at the center with a restaurant immediately behind it. The sea on the south
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is
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used
for boat rides with the new built tier.

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making the
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IELTS academic describe and compare the given two maps

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4 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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