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A number of people say that later in time nobody will purchase printed newspapers or books, they will be able to see everything they desire online without spending money.

A number of people say that later in time nobody will purchase printed newspapers or books, they will be able to see everything they desire online without spending money. oRx39
A number of people say that later in time nobody will purchase printed newspapers or books, they will be able to see everything they desire online without spending money. This essay disagrees that digital books will replace everything printed. Some people can not watch computer or other device’s screens for a long time or they just can not afford buying a thing thats allows them to read books or articles they desire online. In this time of age computer screens are everywhere, so some people get conditions from them that do not allow them to starte at digital books, they might become blind or even get a worse illness than they already have. Humankind is not developed that much to cure some diseases, that are caused by unimportant things, for now, we are focusing on bigger issues than blindness. Consequently, people will not buy things that are hurting them. So it is impossible to replace printed books with something digital. Money is extremly precious, most people can not afford to spend it on things that are not important or can be bought in cheaper price. If developed devices were cheaper than it is now, more peole would buy it. For now, everything is expensive, even food, so people are not able to buy developed things, they struggle to get by every day. It is true that, if you buy one computer, you will not pay for newspapers. But, as I said, even people who live in industrialized countries can not afford to pay for internet monthly or buy expensive devices In conlusion, people who are saying that printed books and newspapers will be replaced with digital versions of them are wrong. In this time of age it is impossible to change real books with computers.
A number of
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say that later in
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nobody will
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purchase
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printed
newspapers or
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books
, they will be able to
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see
everything they desire online without spending money. This essay disagrees that digital
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books
will replace everything
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printed
.
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Some
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people
can not
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watch
computer or other device’s screens for a long
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time or
they
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just
can not afford
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buying
a thing
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thats
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allows
them to read
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books
or articles they desire online.

In this
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time
of age computer screens are everywhere,
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so
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some
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people
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get
conditions from them that do not
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allow
them to
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starte at
digital
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books
, they might become blind or even
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get
a worse illness than they already have. Humankind is not developed that much to cure
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some
diseases, that
are caused
by unimportant things, for
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now
, we are focusing on bigger issues than blindness.
Consequently
,
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people
will not
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buy
things that are hurting them.
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So
it is impossible to replace
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printed
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books
with something digital.

Money is
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extremly
precious, most
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people
can not afford to spend it on things that are not
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important
or can be
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bought
in cheaper price. If developed devices were cheaper than it is
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now
, more
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peole
would
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buy
it. For
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now
, everything is expensive, even food,
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so
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people
are not able to
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buy
developed things, they struggle to
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get
by every day. It is true that, if you
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buy
one computer, you will not pay for newspapers.
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But
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people
who
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live
in industrialized countries can not afford to pay for internet monthly or
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buy
expensive devices

In
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conlusion
,
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people
who are saying that
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printed
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books
and newspapers will
be replaced
with digital versions of them are
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wrong
. In this
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time
of age it is impossible to
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change
real
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books
with computers.
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IELTS academic A number of people say that later in time nobody will purchase printed newspapers or books, they will be able to see everything they desire online without spending money.

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295 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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