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Describe your favourite bird. v.1

Describe your favourite bird. v.1
Describe your favourite bird. You should say: what it is what it looks like if it is a common bird in your country and explain why it is your favourite bird. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer 1: I like all kinds of birds simply because they have the ability to spread their wings at will and live right now, this moment, by getting lost in the big and blue sky without having anything to worry about. Of course, it would be great if I could talk about all of them here, but I just wouldn’t be allowed enough time for it, so I would just talk about a “peacock” – the bird which I just adore – instead. Not sure where to start, when trying to describe a peacock, but describing this beautiful bird is not like describing any other birds in the kingdom of other two-legged creatures because they are just so “majestic” in their looks. However, if we want to describe them in simple words, we could say that they are “perfectly” large in size with colourful pheasants (typically blue and green), and they are famously known for their “distinctive” tails with lustrous colours like those of the beautiful rainbow. In fact, their tails spread out in such a distinctive train that they are easily measured as more than 50/60 per cent of their total body length, with colourful “eye” marks all over it which are usually blue, gold, red, and other hues. The large train, used in mating rituals and courtship displays, is arched into a magnificent fan, which reaches across the bird's back, while also touching the ground on either side. By the way, it should be also mentioned here that even though peacock is my favourite bird, it is not commonly seen in my country. Anyway, the peacock is my favourite bird primarily because it has such a stunningly unique and beautiful look. Not only that but also, they display a spectacular dance in order to attract the female “peahen”. These beautiful creatures also make a melodious sound to call others during the sunrise and the sunset, the fact, which is unique to them only. Finally, it is one of my favourites because they symbolize “eternal love” as when they pair with a mate, they are always loyal and faithful to their partners.   Sample Answer 2: I love birds and I am very fond of parrots. Due to the beautiful colours, sweet vocals and friendly characteristics, the parrot is my favourite bird.   Parrots are also known as psittacines and the main characteristic features of parrots include a strong curved bill, strong legs, their vivid colours, an upright stance and clawed zygodactyls feet. Some parrots are multicoloured and very intelligent. This bird has roughly 393 species and some species have a distinctive ability to imitate human voices. Those birds are very popular as pets.     Yes, parrots are common in our country and according to a survey we have more than 38 species of this bird in our country. It is very unfortunate that these birds are often subject to more exploitation than other groups of birds.  Parrots mostly eat seeds, fruits, buds, pollens, nectars and sometimes arthropods and other animal prey. Some parrots including macaws and cockatoos have long a lifespan.     In my early childhood, I visited a bird’s park with my parents and parrots enchanted me with their varying length, beautiful colours and on top of that their ability to mimic my voice. I was so fascinated with these birds that my parents had to take me to this bird’s park a few more times. I guess my fascination for parrots in my childhood turned out to make this species my favourite bird. Up until then, I have never seen any other birds or animals could mimic human voices.     In my early school days, my parents bought me two parrots and I spent many hours watching their activities and talking to them. These two birds could tell my name and many other words and that brought me closer to them. With time, I started to like them even more. When I turned to 9, my grandmother told me some stories about the encaged birds and how inhuman it is to put them in a cage when they like to fly in the open space. She also told me that it is a sin to confine the birds for our personal entertainment. Luckily I was touched by her lessons and stories and in a few days, I released them. Now I feel somewhat proud of this event and the parrot will always be my favourite bird.     Sample Answer 3: Shy Albatross is one of the most available birds in Australia. This is the bird that has undergone several changes in its category and known in different names. I like it most than any other birds for some reasons. Shy Albatross is a medium-sized bird that is also known as Shy Mollymawk. Earlier, there were some confusions over the classification of this bird. After a number of research and argumentations, bird specialists have reached the decision that Shy Albatross belongs to Thalasarche species. It was shifted from its former class – Diomedea. In the beginning, everyone thought that this one belongs to Salvin’s albatross but observing some changes in its behaviours and types, the species class was changed finally. Now the bird is available on three Australian islands. The bird is also known as the white-capped albatross. Shy Albatross is the bird that has a different look in the size and shape of the albatross family. Usually, a Shy Albatross is 35 inches in length while its wingspan is around 100 inches. It looks a healthy bird for its weight that ranges around 4 kilogrammes. The bird is largest in its species and comes with different colours including white, slate-grey and black. The underwing contains a black thumb marking which has made it attractive while flying. Moreover, the matured Shy Albatross comes with a white forehead accompanied by a crown. The face is pale grey. Some of the body parts are grey-black while the rest of the body is white in colour. Shy Albatross has a grey-yellow beak as well. As a result, the bird has got a gorgeous look. Shy Albatross is a common bird in my country. But somehow it is getting endangered and within the next few days, it may turn into a vulnerable species. Basically climatic changes, loss of their habitat for causes created by men, wild animals etc. are the key reasons behind its vulnerability. To preserve the Shy Albatross, initiatives have been adopted and the research is still underway. Once it was available in almost all the islands of Australia but now the breeding of the bird has declined to a notable extent. Survival for the birds is becoming difficult. Now the birds are available on Albatross Island, Mewstone and Pedra Branca. I like the bird very much for its special nature and looks. Shy Albatross is not a hunting bird but it can participate in pursuit to feed itself. The bird mostly takes fish, tunicates and cephalopods etc. Its breeding is also interesting. Almost all the birds breed in some calm atmosphere but it breeds on rocky islands. The bird is able to make its nest nicely. The nest is made of grass, roots, and soil collected from different places. The child birds have an unbelievable skill of flying. They are able to fly even to South Africa at a stretch. Shy Albatross is able to produce stomach oil which helps them to fly a long distance or to create a food source for their chicks. Sometimes they use it to protect themselves as well. For all such reasons, Shy Albatross has become my preferred bird.   More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe your favourite bird. 1. The house sparrow is my favourite bird. This is a tiny creature with a lightweight body. The bird is available across the UK. I love the house sparrow because it helps me to get up from sleep every day. This is the only bird that does not make any unnecessary noise. Besides, a house sparrow also looks very nice with its coloured feathers. Its beaks are smaller and it has an overall attractive look. Considering all the matters, this is my favourite bird. 2. I love to hear the noise of woodpeckers. In fact, the hairy woodpeckers are my favourite birds in this state, Ohio. The bird has a smart look with a large beak. The colour may vary often but most of them are available in black and white. They are very common in the USA. The sound created by the bird is awesome. Moreover, I adore the labour it invests to dig a tree. So, this is my favourite bird. 3. Though three separate species of this bird is found, I like the black and white magpie. The birds are available in separate colour combinations and the average size is around 43 centimetres. The back markings of the bird are different than the other types of this species. The Australian Magpies is available across Australia. The bird prefers to stay on the ground than flying. And they look wonderful when they jump with the small thin legs. So, this is my favourite bird. 4. Slaty Bunting is my preferred bird here in China. The bird is distinctive than the other birds because of its unusual tail. It is available in brown colour and comes in a smaller size. This is a common bird across the country and comes with a few varieties. I love the bird because it helps to keep the environment cleaner. It takes insects and other unwanted invertebrates as diet. So, the environment remains clean. Considering the environmental issue, I love the bird. 5. Asian Koel is the only bird that I love most in my city in India. The bird belongs to the cuckoo family. This is a singing bird and comes with a light black and brown colour. But the male birds are a bit greenish-black. Sometimes the colour appears light brown as well. This is a very common bird in the country and even it has become the symbol of the local poetry. The bird can sing very well and often I wake up with the sweet whistles of the bird near my window. Therefore, Asian Koel has become my favourite bird.
Describe
your
favourite
bird
. You should say: what it is what it
looks
like if it is a
common
bird
in your
country
and
explain
why it is your
favourite
bird
. [You will
have to
talk
about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
think
about what you're going to say. You can
make
some
notes to
help
you if you wish.
]
 
Model Answer 1:

I like all kinds of
birds
simply
because
they have the ability to spread their wings at will and
live
right
now
, this moment, by getting lost in the
big
and blue sky without having anything to worry about.
Of course
, it would be great if I could
talk
about all of them here,
but
I
just
wouldn’t be
allowed
enough
time for it,
so
I would
just
talk
about a
“peacock”
the
bird
which I
just
adore
instead
.

Not sure where to
start
, when trying to
describe
a
peacock
,
but
describing this
beautiful
bird
is not like describing any
other
birds
in the kingdom of
other
two-legged creatures
because
they are
just
so
“majestic” in their
looks
.
However
, if we want to
describe
them in simple words, we could say that they are “
perfectly
” large in
size
with
colourful
pheasants (
typically
blue and green), and they are
famously
known
for their
“distinctive”
tails with lustrous
colours
like those of the
beautiful
rainbow. In fact, their tails spread out in such a
distinctive
train that they are
easily
measured as more than 50/60 per cent of their total
body
length, with
colourful
“eye” marks all over it which are
usually
blue, gold, red, and
other
hues. The large train,
used
in mating rituals and courtship displays,
is arched
into a magnificent fan, which reaches across the bird's back, while
also
touching the ground on either side. By the way, it should be
also
mentioned here that
even though
peacock
is my
favourite
bird
, it is not
commonly
seen
in my country.

Anyway
, the
peacock
is my
favourite
bird
primarily
because
it has such a
stunningly
unique and
beautiful
look
. Not
only
that
but
also
, they display a spectacular dance in order to attract the female “peahen”. These
beautiful
creatures
also
make
a melodious sound to call others during the sunrise and the sunset, the fact, which is unique to them
only
.
Finally
, it is one of my
favourites
because
they symbolize “eternal
love”
as when they pair with a mate, they are always loyal and faithful to their partners.
 
Sample Answer 2:

I
love
birds and
I am
very
fond of
parrots
. Due to the
beautiful
colours
, sweet vocals and friendly characteristics, the
parrot
is my
favourite
bird
.
 
Parrots
are
also
known
as
psittacines
and the main characteristic features of
parrots
include a strong curved bill, strong legs, their vivid
colours
, an upright stance and clawed
zygodactyls
feet.
Some
parrots
are
multicoloured
and
very
intelligent. This
bird
has roughly 393 species and
some
species have a
distinctive
ability to imitate human voices. Those
birds
are
very
popular as pets.
   
Yes,
parrots
are
common
in our
country
and according to a survey we have more than 38 species of this
bird
in our
country
. It is
very
unfortunate that these
birds
are
often
subject to more exploitation than
other
groups of
birds
.
 Parrots
mostly
eat seeds, fruits, buds,
pollens
,
nectars
and
sometimes
arthropods and
other
animal prey.
Some
parrots
including macaws and cockatoos have long a lifespan.
   
In my early childhood, I visited a
bird’s
park with my parents and
parrots
enchanted me with their varying length,
beautiful
colours
and
on top of that
their ability to mimic my voice. I was
so
fascinated with these
birds
that my parents had to take me to this
bird’s
park a few more times.
I guess
my fascination for
parrots
in my childhood turned out to
make
this species my
favourite
bird
. Up until then, I have never
seen
any
other
birds
or animals could mimic human voices.
   
In my early school days, my parents
bought
me two
parrots
and I spent
many
hours watching their activities and talking to them. These two
birds
could
tell
my name and
many
other
words and that brought me closer to them. With time, I
started
 to like them even more. When I turned to 9, my grandmother
told
me
some
stories about the
encaged
birds
and how inhuman it is to put them in a cage when they like to
fly
in the open space. She
also
told
me that it is a sin to confine the
birds
for our personal entertainment. Luckily I
was touched
by her lessons and stories and in a few days, I released them.
Now
I feel somewhat proud of this
event
and the
parrot
will always be my
favourite
bird
.
   
Sample Answer
3: Shy
Albatross
is one of the most
available
birds
in Australia. This is the
bird
that has undergone several
changes
in its category and
known
in
different
names. I like it
most
than any
other
birds
for
some
reasons.

Shy
Albatross
is a medium-sized
bird
that is
also
known
as
Shy
Mollymawk
. Earlier, there were
some
confusions over the classification of this
bird
. After a number of research and
argumentations
,
bird
specialists have reached the decision that
Shy
Albatross
belongs to
Thalasarche
species. It
was shifted
from its former
class
Diomedea
. In the beginning, everyone
thought
that this one belongs to
Salvin
’s
albatross
but
observing
some
changes
in its
behaviours
and types, the species
class
was
changed
finally
.
Now
the
bird
is
available
on three Australian
islands
. The
bird
is
also
known
as the white-capped albatross.

Shy
Albatross
is the
bird
that has a
different
look
in the
size
and shape of the
albatross
family.
Usually
, a
Shy
Albatross
is
35 inches
in length while its wingspan is around
100 inches
. It
looks
a healthy
bird
for its weight that ranges around 4
kilogrammes
. The
bird
is largest in its species and
comes
with
different
colours
including
white
,
slate-grey
and black. The
underwing
contains a black thumb marking which has made it attractive while flying.
Moreover
, the matured
Shy
Albatross
comes
with a
white
forehead accompanied by a crown. The face is pale
grey
.
Some of the
body
parts are
grey-black
while the rest of the
body
is
white in colour
.
Shy
Albatross
has a
grey-yellow
beak as
well
.
As a result
, the
bird
has
got
a gorgeous look.

Shy
Albatross
is a
common
bird
in my
country
.
But
somehow it is getting endangered and within the
next
few days, it may turn into a vulnerable species.
Basically
climatic
changes
, loss of their habitat for causes created by
men
, wild animals etc. are the key reasons behind its vulnerability. To preserve the
Shy
Albatross
, initiatives have
been adopted
and the research is
still
underway. Once it was
available
in almost all the
islands
of Australia
but
now
the breeding of the
bird
has declined to a notable extent. Survival for the
birds
is becoming difficult.
Now
the
birds
are
available
on
Albatross
Island
,
Mewstone
and
Pedra
Branca
.

I like the
bird
very
much for its special nature and
looks
.
Shy
Albatross
is not a hunting
bird
but
it can participate in pursuit to feed itself. The
bird
mostly
takes fish,
tunicates
and cephalopods etc. Its breeding is
also
interesting. Almost all the
birds
breed in
some
calm atmosphere
but
it breeds on rocky
islands
. The
bird
is able to
make
its nest
nicely
. The nest
is made
of grass, roots, and soil collected from
different
places.
The
child
birds
have an unbelievable
skill
of flying. They are able to
fly
even to South Africa at a stretch.
Shy
Albatross
is able to produce stomach oil which
helps
them to
fly
a long distance or to create a food source for their chicks.
Sometimes
they
use
it to protect themselves as
well
. For all such reasons,
Shy
Albatross
has become my preferred
bird
.
 
More
Ideas
to
talk
about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic:
Describe
your
favourite
bird
. 1. The
house sparrow
is my
favourite
bird
. This is a tiny creature with a lightweight
body
. The
bird
is
available
across the UK. I
love
the
house sparrow
because
it
helps
me to
get
up from sleep every day. This is the
only
bird
that does not
make
any unnecessary noise.
Besides
, a
house sparrow
also
looks
very
nice with its
coloured
feathers. Its beaks are smaller and it has an
overall
attractive
look
. Considering all the matters, this is my
favourite
bird. 2
. I
love
to hear the noise of woodpeckers. In fact, the hairy woodpeckers are my
favourite
birds
in this state, Ohio. The
bird
has a smart
look
with a large beak. The
colour
may vary
often
but
most of them are
available
in black and
white
. They are
very
common
in the USA. The sound created by the
bird
is awesome.
Moreover
, I adore the
labour
it invests to dig a tree.
So
, this is my
favourite
bird. 3
. Though three separate species of this
bird
is found
, I like the black and
white
magpie. The
birds
are
available
in separate
colour
combinations and the average
size
is around 43
centimetres
. The back markings of the
bird
are
different
than
the
other
types of this species.
The
Australian Magpies is
available
across Australia.
The
bird
prefers to stay on the ground than flying. And they
look
wonderful when they jump with the
small
thin legs.
So
, this is my
favourite
bird. 4
.
Slaty
Bunting is my preferred
bird
here in China. The
bird
is
distinctive
than the
other
birds
because
of its unusual tail. It is
available
in brown
colour
and
comes
in a smaller
size
. This is a
common
bird
across the
country
and
comes
with a few varieties. I
love
the
bird
because
it
helps
to
keep
the environment cleaner. It takes insects and
other
unwanted invertebrates as diet.
So
, the environment remains clean. Considering the environmental issue, I
love
the
bird. 5
. Asian
Koel
is the
only
bird
that I
love
most in my city in India. The
bird
belongs to the cuckoo family. This is a singing
bird
and
comes
with a light black and brown
colour
.
But
the male
birds
are a bit greenish-black.
Sometimes
the
colour
appears light brown as
well
. This is a
very
common
bird
in the
country
and even it has become the symbol of the local poetry. The
bird
can sing
very
well
and
often
I wake up with the sweet whistles of the
bird
near my window.
Therefore
, Asian
Koel
has become my
favourite
bird
.
33Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
252Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
83Mistakes

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