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Describe an elderly person in your family who you enjoy talking to. v.1

Describe an elderly person in your family who you enjoy talking to. v. 1
Describe an elderly person in your family who you enjoy talking to. You should say: who this person is what he/she is like how often you see him/her and explain why you enjoy talking to this person. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer: Thank you very much for the opportunity to let me talk about a senior person in our family. My grandfather is the elderly person in my family and lives with us here in Wellington. He is an intelligent and active man even in his 60s. Most of his stories are made from his real-life experiences when he served as a soldier in the army. So, I enjoy talking with this person and learn numerous invaluable lessons from each of the conversations. This is a great cue card task topic for me and I would like to thank you for this. I am glad to have it in my share. My grandfather, Thomas Connor, was a brave soldier and served in the army for over 20 years. He was promoted to a higher rank of the army and got an early retirement for his vision impairment. But he looked very strong and smart with his official uniform. Still, he has a smart look with his glasses. He is able to drink a huge amount of beer at a time and loves to take part in outdoor activities. I frequently meet him and when it is a weekend, I am glued to my grandfather round the day. In this time, I have nothing to do and the college is closed. Moreover, my grandfather also gets some spare moments to spend with the family. But I occupy the largest share of the moments from him. On the regular days, I do not have much time to spend with grandpa. I only wish him a good morning and leave for the college. I love talking with this person. He has travelled to different parts of the world and so his knowledge is far enriched than the other people of my family. He also loves to spend time with me and teaches me about numerous issues. Based on the reasons, I like to talk with him. More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe an elderly person in your family who you enjoy talking to. 1. I live in a nuclear family in Paris and enjoy talking to my grandmother. She looks nice with her curly hair and deep blue eyes. I frequently meet with her and most of the time it is evening when I meet her. I love to talk with her for some reasons. She knows much about many real-life skills and shares her knowledge with me. Besides, when I am in trouble, I take suggestions from her. 2. My dad is the most admirable person in my family and I love to talk with him most. He is a retired police officer and served the German police for many years. Since he is retired, he passes most of his time at home and engaged in writing. But I only meet him during the night hours as I remain busy round the day with my academic activities. He loves to talk and his way of talking is different from other Germans. So, I enjoy talking with him. 3. Grandma is the most generous person in our family. I love to talk with her. She is now old and got several old age complications. But she can tell attractive stories. So, I love to listen to her stories in the bedtime. She is the only person whom I can share everything. I share my happenings of college and she also enjoys listening to me. 4. My mom is my best friend. She looks gorgeous with all the time. I meet her every day. In fact, she is my constant companion at home. I spent all the times with her at my residence located I Indonesia. I love to talk with her. She knows everything. She guides me on all the necessary issues. In fact, I am amazed at her solutions. So, I love to talk with her. 5. Johnson is my uncle who is in his 60s and I am a big fan of him. He is my mentor in every respects. He has got a simple look with a cute face. I meet him every day. Actually, we share the same room at home. So, meeting with him is not a big deal for me. I love to have conversations with him for his insights. He can analyze situations perfectly and takes necessary decisions which are highly commendable.    If you can talk about this cue card topic, you should be able to answer the following topics as well: 1. Describe an old person you admire. 2. Describe someone you often have conversations with. 3. Describe someone in your family. 4. Describe one of your relatives whom you like. 5. Describe someone you like to spend time with. 6. Describe a person who you turn to for advice.
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Describe
an elderly
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person
in your
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family
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who
you
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enjoy
talking to. You should say:
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who
this
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person
is what he/she is like how
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often
you
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see
him/her and
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explain
why you
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enjoy
talking to this
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person
. [You will
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have to
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talk
about the
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topic
for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you're going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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Sample Answer:

Thank you
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very
much for the opportunity to
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let
me
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talk
about a senior
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person
in our
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family
. My
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grandfather
is the elderly
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person
in my
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family
and
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lives
with us here in Wellington. He is an intelligent and active
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man
even in his 60s. Most of his stories
are made
from his real-life experiences when he served as a soldier in the army.
So
, I
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enjoy
talking with this
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person
and learn numerous invaluable lessons from each of the conversations. This is a great cue card task
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topic
for me and I would like to thank you for this. I am glad to have it in my share.

My
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grandfather
, Thomas Connor, was a brave soldier and served in the army for over 20 years. He
was promoted
to a higher rank of the army and
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got
an early retirement for his vision impairment.
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But
he looked
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very
strong and smart with his official uniform.
Still
, he has a smart
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look
with his glasses. He is able to drink a huge amount of beer at a
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time
and
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loves
to
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take part
in outdoor activities.

I
frequently
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meet
him and when it is a weekend, I
am glued
to my
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grandfather
round the day. In this
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time
, I have nothing to do and the college
is closed
.
Moreover
, my
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grandfather
also
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gets
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some
spare moments to
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spend
with the
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family
.
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But
I occupy the largest
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share
of the moments from him. On the regular days, I do not have much
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time
to
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spend
with grandpa. I
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only
wish him a
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good
morning and
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leave
for the college.

I
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love
talking with this
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person
. He has travelled to
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different
parts of the world and
so
his knowledge is far enriched than the other
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people
of my
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family
. He
also
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loves
to
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spend
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time
with me and teaches me about numerous issues. Based on the reasons, I like to
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talk
with him. More
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Ideas
to
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talk
about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card
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topic
:
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Topic
:
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Describe
an elderly
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person
in your
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family
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who
you
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enjoy
talking to. 1. I
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live
in a nuclear
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family
in Paris and
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enjoy
talking to my grandmother. She
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looks
nice with her curly hair and deep blue eyes. I
frequently
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meet
with her and most of the
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time
it is evening when I
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meet
her. I
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love
to
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talk
with her for
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some
reasons. She knows much about
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many
real-life
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skills
and
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shares
her knowledge with me.
Besides
, when I am in trouble, I take suggestions from her.

2. My dad is the most admirable
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person
in my
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family
and I
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love
to
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talk
with him most. He is a retired police officer and served the German police for
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many
years. Since he
is retired
, he passes most of his
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time
at home and engaged in writing.
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But
I
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only
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meet
him during the night hours as I remain busy round the day with my academic activities. He
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loves
to
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talk
and his way of talking is
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different
from other Germans.
So
, I
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enjoy
talking with him.

3. Grandma is the most generous
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person
in our
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family
. I
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love
to
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talk
with her. She is
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now
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old
and
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got
several
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old
age complications.
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But
she can
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tell
attractive stories.
So
, I
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love
to listen to her stories in the bedtime. She is the
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only
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person
whom I can
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share
everything. I
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share
my happenings of
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college and
she
also
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enjoys
listening to me.

4. My mom is my best friend. She
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looks
gorgeous with all the
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time
. I
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meet
her every day. In fact, she is my constant companion at home. I spent all the
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times
with her at my residence located I Indonesia. I
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love
to
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talk
with her. She knows everything. She guides me on all the necessary issues. In fact, I
am amazed
at her solutions.
So
, I
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love
to
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talk
with her.

5. Johnson is my uncle
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who
is in his
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60s and
I am a
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big
fan of him. He is my mentor in every
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respects
. He has
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got
a simple
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look
with a cute face. I
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meet
him every day.
Actually
, we
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share
the same room at home.
So
, meeting with him is not a
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big
deal for me. I
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love
to have conversations with him for his insights. He can analyze situations
perfectly
and takes necessary decisions which are
highly
commendable.
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If you can
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talk
about this cue card
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topic
, you should be able to answer the following
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topics
as
well
:

1.
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Describe
an
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old
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person
you admire.

2.
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Describe
someone you
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often
have conversations with.

3.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
someone in your
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family. 4
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
one of your relatives whom you like.

5.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
someone you like to
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spend
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time
with.

6.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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person
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who
you turn to for advice.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
97Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe an elderly person in your family who you enjoy talking to. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
15 paragraphs
878 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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