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Describe an app you use on your mobile phone. v.1

Describe an app you use on your mobile phone. v. 1
Describe an app you use on your mobile phone. You should say: what it is how you use it what benefits you get from this app and explain why this mobile app is important to you. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer 1: I own a Sony smartphone and it is powered by the Android mobile operating system. One of the applications I frequently use on my phone is Gmail. This is an email application that allows any Gmail user to send or receive emails. This application enables me to check my emails or send an email whenever I need to. Gmail is a free email service provider which is owned by the tech giant Google Inc. Both my personal and work email accounts are in Gmail and I have to check for new emails several times and day. I often send emails to my colleagues, friends and family members using this application. The application is quite easy to use and offers an intuitive interface. To use it, I just have to tap on the app icon and the main interface appears. The home screen shows the Inbox, Compose Email, Search and Menu options. The menu brings several other options including the categorised email viewing option along with the 'Label' feature. I can use the 'Label' and 'Tag' features to manage categories of my emails. The emails I sent are saved in the 'Sent' folder and deleting an email takes just a tap of a finger. The 'Settings' and 'Help' options are present at the bottom of the menu. The 'Search' feature helps me find any email quite easily. Furthermore, whenever, I need to open a document,   I can either save it to the local memory or directly open it using Google docs and this is quite convenient for me. The Gmail mobile application is one of the most downloaded and widely used applications that has more than 1 billion users. Gmail used to offer more than 1 GB storage a few years back and these days Google accounts holders have access to a shared pool of storage i. e. every account holder of Google gets 15 GB of free space, which is shared across his Gmail, Google Drive, and Google+ Photos. It also offers 25 MB attachment option in a single email. I often need to send large files, especially to my colleagues and I find Gmail application a lifesaver for me! This application that I use for accessing my email has an advanced spam filtering feature which keeps my 'Inbox' clean and keeps away the spammers. I have tried a few other email service providers and their emails access applications before I finally switched to Gmail. In terms of features, storage, accessibility, performance, security, Gmail application is second to none. I have been using this application for more than 6 years and it hardly crashes or cause any problem. Since email has become one of the primary modes of communications and we cannot do without it in modern days. we need to use a handy email application so that we can check or send emails anytime, even when we are on the streets. The Gmail application perfectly match the requirements and expectations I have for such an application. Finally, I would like to say that this is the most important mobile application to me.     Sample Answer 2: Recently I have bought an iPhone 7 mobile phone and I am very glad of its features and performance. I installed the Viber application and this is a very useful application for me. Now I will describe the features of this particular application, how I use it and why this is a handy mobile application for me.   In fact, Viber is a kind of platform that is able to transmit messages instantly to another end where the similar app is being used. Besides, the app is able to transmit images, audios or even videos as well. So, globally a wide range of people use this app for instant messaging. As a direct result, it has become a popular communication app for smartphone users. The platform has been developed by Viber Media, an Israel-based company. Now the app is available for several mobile operating systems like iOS for Apple, Android, BlackBerry OS, Windows Phone and others. The number of registered users is on increase for this app.   Using Viber is very easy and efficient. There are no complexities of the installation process. At first, the smartphone users are to download the app on their device from their respective app sources like iTunes App Store or Google Play store. Then they are to install the app on the device and set it up. During the installation process, they are to allow the app to use some of the features of the phone like access to the phonebook or photos etc. Besides, the app may ask for permission on some other specific issues based on your device features. Once the installation is done, one can start using the app. But without an active internet connection, the app will not work. The users would not be able to send or receive any messages or notifications. So, an active internet connection is required to use Viber.    I am glad about this app. It has helped me greatly to cut my phone call costs. In fact, communication through the app is for free. Only some megabytes are used to send or receive the messages. So, I do not need to pay any extra charge for making a call on Viber. Besides, it is easier to send images using this app. Using the smartphone, any Viber user can send images from the device’s image library. The app comes with another special feature using which I can create a group with the other users and may have chats with them where I can share my latest images. The use of emoticons is also another feature that is benefiting me to express my feelings.   In this age of globalisation, using the internet-based apps to communicate is the best way, in my opinion, and experience. As a student, often I need to share my notes with my buddies and it helps me in sharing the notes and lessons in image formats. Besides, the cost is quite low. Additionally, I am able to share my other important events using the images and emoticons. But such facilities are still unavailable with the ordinary telecommunication system. Though they are present in some mobile platforms, they are available on a limited scale which cannot express the entire emotional state. Besides, Viber has a number of functionalities and the users can also buy credits to make voice calls. The user interface is attractive and allows me to have my image with my contact details. I prefer this application for all the advantages it offers. More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe an app you use on your mobile phone. 1. I am a businessman here in Hong Kong and a smartphone user. I frequently need to use apps for multifarious reasons. And often I use the Skype on my mobile to communicate with other people. This is an external app and it requires the internet connection to be used. I can make phone calls, video calls and even chat with people who have the similar app. The mobility of the app is the best benefit for me as I cannot sit before a computer always. So, I carry the app on my mobile phone and thus the app is highly important to me. 2. Reading newspaper is my hobby and I have downloaded a newspaper app on my phone. The app is named after the newspaper and I need to use WiFi plans or my mobile data to use the app. The app is highly beneficial to me because I can know the latest happenings in the world through the app. Whenever there is a news updated in the newspaper, it notifies me. So, I check the news and get the latest updates. The app is important because I have less time to check the newspaper and I remain busy round the day. So this is unfeasible for me to collect the newspaper and know everything. Hence, the app is important to me. 3. Browsing the internet on the mobile phone is easy and when there is a light browsing app, the experience becomes smoother. I use the browser often to search important matters on the internet. The app is beneficial in many terms such as this is light and takes less space for installation, browsing is faster and compatible with my mobile phone. The app is also important to me because it allows certain features of the computer. I can make bookmarks too here. Based on the matter, the app is important to me. 4. I am an early riser and use my cell phone app to get up early. I use an alarm application on the phone. This is a very special app for me and I set the alarm for the early morning. I do not need any internet connection to use the app and it runs with the other internal applications. The app basically helps to rise in the early morning and move for the morning walk. The alarm is important to me as it helps to rise in time. Besides, the interface of the app is also attractive and often helps me to remind important things. 5. The ram cleaner that I use on my mobile phone is a hybrid app. The use of the app is easier. I just tap on the app and it starts running. The application cleans all the unnecessary files from the mobile phone and makes it faster. Besides, there are some other benefits as well like it helps the phone battery to get perfectly charged. It also reminds me of the charging time to place the phone in charge. The app is important to me because it helps to maintain the phone’s health rightly.
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Describe
an app you
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use
on your mobile
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phone
. You should say: what it is how you
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use
it what benefits you
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get
from this app and
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explain
why this mobile app is
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important
to you. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you're going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
Sample Answer 1:

I
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own
a Sony smartphone and it
is powered
by the Android mobile operating system. One of the
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applications
I
frequently
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use
on my
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phone
is Gmail. This is an email
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application
that
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allows
any Gmail
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user
to
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send
or receive emails. This
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application
enables me to
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check
my emails or
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send
an email whenever I
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need
to. Gmail is a free email service provider which is
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owned
by the tech giant
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Google


Inc.

Both my personal and work email accounts are in Gmail and I
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have to
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check
for new emails several
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times
and day. I
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often
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send
emails to my colleagues, friends and family members using this
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application
. The
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application
is
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quite
easy to
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use
and
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offers
an intuitive interface. To
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use
it, I
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just
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have to
tap on the app icon and the main interface appears. The home screen
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shows
the Inbox, Compose Email, Search and Menu
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options
. The menu brings several
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other
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options
including the
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categorised
email viewing
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option
along with the 'Label'
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feature
. I can
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use
the 'Label' and 'Tag' features to manage categories of my emails. The emails I
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sent
are saved
in the '
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Sent
' folder and deleting an email takes
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just
a tap of a finger. The 'Settings' and '
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Help
'
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options
are present at the bottom of the menu.
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The
'Search'
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feature
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helps
me find any email
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quite
easily
.
Furthermore
, whenever, I
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need
to open a document,
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I can either save it to the local memory or
directly
open it using
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Google docs
and this is
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quite
convenient for me.

The Gmail mobile
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application
is one of the most downloaded and
widely
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used
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applications
that has more than 1 billion
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users
. Gmail
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used
to
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offer
more than 1 GB storage a few years back and these days Google accounts holders have access to a shared pool of storage
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i. e.
every account holder of Google
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gets
15 GB of free space, which
is shared
across his Gmail, Google Drive, and Google+ Photos. It
also
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offers
25 MB attachment
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option
in a single email. I
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often
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need
to
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send
large files,
especially
to my colleagues and I find Gmail
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application
a lifesaver for me! This
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application
that I
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use
for accessing my email has an advanced spam filtering
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feature
which
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keeps
my 'Inbox' clean and
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keeps
away the spammers.

I have tried a few
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other
email service providers and their emails access
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applications
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before
I
finally
switched to Gmail. In terms of features, storage, accessibility, performance, security, Gmail
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application
is
second to none
. I have been using this
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application
for more than 6 years and it hardly crashes or cause any problem.

Since email has become one of the primary modes of
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communications and
we cannot do without it in modern days.
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we
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need
to
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use
a handy email
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application
so
that we can
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check
or
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send
emails anytime, even when we are on the streets. The Gmail
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application
perfectly
match the requirements and expectations I have for such an
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application
.
Finally
, I would like to say that this is the most
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important
mobile
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application
to me.
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Sample Answer 2:

Recently I have
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bought
an iPhone 7 mobile
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phone and
I am
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very
glad of its features and performance. I installed the
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Viber
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application
and this is a
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very
useful
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application
for me.
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Now
I will
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describe
the features of this particular
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application
, how I
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use
it and why this is a handy mobile
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application
for me.
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In fact,
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Viber
is a kind of platform
that is
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able
to transmit messages
instantly
to another
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end
where the similar app is being
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used
.
Besides
, the app is
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able
to transmit
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images
, audios or even videos as
well
.
So
, globally a wide range of
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people
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use
this app for instant messaging. As a direct result, it has become a popular communication app for smartphone
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users
. The platform has
been developed
by
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Viber
Media, an Israel-based
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company
.
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Now
the app is available for several mobile operating systems like iOS for Apple, Android, BlackBerry OS, Windows
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Phone
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and others
. The number of registered
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users
is on increase for this app.
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Using
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Viber
is
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very
easy and efficient. There are no complexities of the installation process. At
first
, the smartphone
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users
are to download the app on their
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device
from their respective app sources like iTunes App Store or
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Google Play store
. Then they are to install the app on the
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device
and set it up. During the installation process, they are to
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allow
the app to
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use
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some of the
features of the
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phone
like access to the
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phonebook
or photos etc.
Besides
, the app may
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ask for
permission on
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some
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other
specific issues based on your
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device
features. Once the installation
is done
, one can
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start
using the app.
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But
without an active internet
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connection
, the app will not work. The
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users
would not be
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able
to
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send
or receive any messages or notifications.
So
, an active internet
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connection
is required
to
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use
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Viber
.
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I am glad about this app. It has
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helped
me
greatly
to
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cut
my
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phone
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call
costs. In fact, communication through the app is for free.
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Only
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some
megabytes are
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used
to
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send
or receive the messages.
So
, I do not
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need
to pay any extra charge for making a
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call
on
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Viber
.
Besides
, it is easier to
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send
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images
using this app. Using the smartphone, any
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Viber
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user
can
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send
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images
from the
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device’s
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image
library. The app
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comes
with another special
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feature
using which I can create a group with the
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other
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users
and may have chats with them where I can share my latest
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images
. The
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use
of emoticons is
also
another
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feature
that is
benefiting me to express my feelings.
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In this age of
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globalisation
, using the internet-based apps to communicate is the best way, in my opinion, and experience. As a student,
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often
I
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need
to share my notes with my buddies and it
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helps
me in sharing the notes and lessons in
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image
formats.
Besides
, the cost is
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quite
low.
Additionally
, I am
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able
to share my
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other
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important
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events
using the
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images
and emoticons.
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But
such facilities are
still
unavailable with the ordinary telecommunication system. Though they are present in
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some
mobile platforms, they are available on a limited scale which cannot express the entire emotional state.
Besides
,
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Viber
has a number of functionalities and the
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users
can
also
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buy
credits to
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make
voice
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calls
. The
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user
interface is attractive and
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allows
me to have my
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image
with my contact
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details
. I prefer this
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application
for all the advantages it
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offers
. More
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Ideas
to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic:
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Describe
an app you
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use
on your mobile
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phone
. 1. I am a businessman here in Hong Kong and a smartphone
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user
. I
frequently
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need
to
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use
apps for multifarious reasons. And
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often
I
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use
the Skype on my mobile to communicate with
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other
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people
. This is an external app and it requires the internet
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connection
to be
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used
. I can
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make
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phone
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calls
, video
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calls
and even chat with
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people
who have the similar app. The mobility of the app is the best benefit for me as I cannot sit
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before
a computer
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always
.
So
, I carry the app on my mobile
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phone
and
thus
the app is
highly
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important
to me.

2. Reading
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newspaper
is my hobby and I have downloaded a
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newspaper
app on my
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phone
. The app
is named
after the
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newspaper
and I
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need
to
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use
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WiFi
plans or my mobile data to
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use
the app. The app is
highly
beneficial to me
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because
I can know the latest happenings in the world through the app. Whenever there is
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a news
updated in the
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newspaper
, it notifies me.
So
, I
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check
the news and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the latest updates. The app is
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important
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because
I have less
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time
to
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check
the
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newspaper
and I remain busy round the day.
So
this is unfeasible for me to collect the
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newspaper
and
Did you mean "now"?
know
everything.
Hence
, the app is
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important
to me.

3. Browsing the internet on the mobile
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phone
is easy and when there is a light browsing app, the experience becomes smoother. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the browser
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often
to search
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important
matters on the internet. The app is beneficial in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
terms such as this is light and takes less space for installation, browsing is faster and compatible with my mobile
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phone
. The app is
also
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important
to me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it
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allows
certain features of the computer. I can
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make
bookmarks too here. Based on the matter, the app is
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important
to me.

4. I am an
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early
riser and
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use
my cell
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phone
app to
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get
up
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early
. I
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use
an alarm
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application
on the
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phone
. This is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
special app for me and I set the alarm for the
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early
morning. I do not
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need
any internet
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connection
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the app and it runs with the
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other
internal
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applications
. The app
basically
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helps
to rise in the
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early
morning and
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move
for the morning walk. The alarm is
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important
to me as it
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helps
to rise in
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time
.
Besides
, the interface of the app is
also
attractive and
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often
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helps
me to remind
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important
things.

5. The ram cleaner that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
on my mobile
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phone
is a hybrid app. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of the app is easier. I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
tap on the app and it
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starts
running. The
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application
cleans all the unnecessary files from the mobile
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phone
and
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makes
it faster.
Besides
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
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other
benefits as
well
like it
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helps
the
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phone
battery to
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get
perfectly
charged. It
also
reminds me of the charging
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time
to place the
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phone
in charge. The app is
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important
to me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it
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helps
to maintain the
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phone’s
health
rightly
.
26Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
177Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
31Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe an app you use on your mobile phone. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
12 paragraphs
1716 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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