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Describe a time when you trusted a stranger. v.1

Describe a time when you trusted a stranger. v. 1
Describe a time when you trusted a stranger. You should say: when it was who this stranger was why you had to trust this person and explain what happened then. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer 1: In an ideal world, nobody should really be strangers to us because we all share pretty much the same goals, feelings, sadness and happiness in our life. But, unfortunately, we don’t live in an ideal world where our limitation as humans and fear of the unknown force us to be sceptical about trusting a stranger. Needless to say, I am not immune from this scepticism either. But, I still needed to trust a stranger about 5 years ago when my father had to go through a critical by-pass heart surgery. By the way, my father was already a 70 years old person back then, and he had suffered from a massive heart attack a few days earlier. Luckily, we were in the hand of a very expert heart surgeon, who assured us that his team would have no problem in having a successful operation on my father by the grace of almighty. Having said that, however, he also warned us at the same time that my father was also in risk of losing too much blood at the time of surgery since he was a rather old man. Anyway, the doctor also gave us an idea as to how many bags of blood would be required to keep my father in a stable condition. So, we started to talk to all of my family members and relatives, but unfortunately, we were still short of one blood bag. So, we decided to contact some professional blood donors even though we heard a lot of negative comments about them earlier. But, since, we had no other options because my father had a rather rare blood group, we decided to accept his blood after running some regular tests on his health condition. Luckily, the blood transfusion into the body of my father, who had just gone through some serious surgery, was successful without any reaction or complication. I and my entire family thanked the blood donor from the bottom of our hearts. In response, he simply said that he was happy to have been able to help.   Model Answer 2: Interesting topic indeed and thank you for allowing me to talk about an event when I trusted a stranger! We sometimes have to trust people we do not know. The outcome of this faith and trust varies and trusting a complete stranger is not always a bad idea. However, our intuition and experience tell us not to rely on a complete outsider. Despite this, I believed people on different occasions and many times they were completely unknown to me. One day, I was on my way to my hometown and our bus got delayed. To add more misery, on the route, the bus suddenly stopped working in a desolate area. The driver told us that the brake of the bus was not working and he had to stop the car to avoid any risk. Some of the passengers took alternative buses but the rest of us were stuck there. At least 4-5 hours were needed to repair the bus and waiting that long was not a good idea especially in this strange place. All of a sudden a stranger approached us and told me that we should hire a private car and reach our destination. I noticed that he had already managed three other passengers who had accepted his proposition. However, when this person told me that the nearest car hire service was two miles away and we would need to give him $30 per person so that he can pay the money to the company and bring the car, my gut feeling told me not to trust him. I asked him to call the car rental company to pick us, and he replied that he had already done so and the car rental company would not send the car this far without the advance payment. The stranger I am talking about was around 35 years old and as I recall his name was Stephen. As per a conversation I had with him, he was a banker. I trusted this stranger, gave him 30 dollars and waited dubiously for an hour for him to return. At a time during my waiting, I thought he would not show up at all. Nevertheless, after approximately 2 hours, he came back with a hired car and a driver. It was a great relief to me. I laughed silently for distrusting this person initially. However, it turned out that trusting him was a good idea. I reached home just before the darkness settled in and thanked this stranger, whose name was Stephen, for his initiative to hire a car and reach home before the night. His plan, stamina, leadership quality and timely decision saved us from the possible danger of being stuck in an unknown place. When the car dropped me near my home, the stranger had already dropped off the car. Nonetheless, I thanked him again, this time silently without him noticing my gratitude for his timely decision and action.   Sample Answer 3: Recently my journey to Australia from Vietnam was a bit difficult. During that time, I had to rely on a stranger. I would like to talk about this event when I trusted this unknown person. I am a journalist and my office had recently sent me to Vietnam to cover some news articles. So, after completing the tasks in Vietnam, I had to return to Australia. On the way back home, I met this person. When I entered the Ho Chi Minh City Airport, I needed help, and the man lent a helping hand to me. In fact, without his support, it was almost impossible for me to get rid of the customs and immigration troubles. The man, Jacob Abraham was an Australian as well. He was a scriptwriter (that I came to know later) for television commercials. He also travelled in Vietnam and was returning on the same day as I was. He is on the view that if someone is in trouble, it is our moral responsibility to help this person - this is what he told me when I thanked him for his support. I guess I trusted him because he appeared to be a complete gentleman to me. Some people, if not all, can give an impression that you can rely on them and he was one such person, I guess. I was having trouble explaining to one of the customs officers that my stay was extended by the immigration authority but he was not convinced. I had a few bags and luggage and it was tough for me to carry them all with me as I needed to visit different rooms in the immigration section. Jacob Abraham, the person I am talking about came to my rescue. I requested him to look after my baggage and he did so for about an hour -a great help for me considering the situation. Actually, I had no options left rather than relying on him. It was not possible for me to carry the heavy suitcases and bags with me to clear the bureaucratic issues related to immigration. I think he did a great job for me. If it was not for me him, I had to leave the luggage unattended! I profoundly thanked him for his selfless help. We departed at a time but he made my day and I would always remember his support.   More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe a time when you trusted a stranger. 1. You know how difficult it is to get a bus during the rush hours in New York City and I was literally running to get on the bus a few days ago.   So, I had to rely on a complete stranger. I asked him to hold my backpack when the bus started to move. Later, I came to know that he was Mr Alex and works a few blocks away from my office. I had to trust him because it was difficult for me to ride on the bus with the backpack. 2. I love to travel and often need to trust outsiders in different places. But meeting with a stranger in Mumbai was completely different. I could not get the name of this young boy. I had to trust him because I wanted to get a picture of me and my wife at a tourist spot in India. After clicking a few shots, the boys asked for money. It was surprising to me though I paid a five-dollar bill to that boy. In fact, I had no idea that someone could demand money for only clicking some pictures. 3. Honestly, I do not trust unknown people and my experiences are bitter. But this time, I had to trust a man named Joseph. Actually, I wanted to get a ticket for a football match in Barcelona and failed to get in the queue of the ticket booth. So, I sought help from this person. And this gentle and kind man got tickets for me as he was in the front row. If I went to the queue, I could not have managed tickets for that match. Thanks to that good fellow. 4. Recently, I went to Berlin and took supports from a stranger. I lost my purse accidentally. So, a woman named Alberta came to my help. I had to trust her because I had no other options left. I stood alone at the station and tried to get help from someone to get back home. Finally, Alberta approached me. I shared a ride with her and trusted her from the very beginning. 5. A few days ago, I had to trust a stranger. The man helped me to avoid some unwanted troubles. I could not identify the man but he was cooperative. Without any reason, some youths were teasing me on the road. I was returning home from my university and then this man came to my help. I trusted him and he saved me from a bad situation. He shouted at the boys and escorted me to my home. I thanked him for his courage and support for me at a crucial moment.   If you can talk about 'Describe a time when you trusted a stranger', you are supposed to be able to answer the following topics: 1. Describe a time when someone helped you. 2. Describe a time when you helped someone. 3. Talk about an event when someone came at your rescue. 4. Describe an event when you sought help from someone you did not know.
Describe
a
time
when you
trusted
a
stranger
. You should say: when it was
who
this
stranger
was why you had to
trust
this
person
and
explain
what happened then. [You will
have to
talk
about the
topic
for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
think
about what you are going to say. You can
make
some
notes to
help
you if you wish.
]
 
Model
Answer
1:

In an ideal world, nobody should
really
be
strangers
to us
because
we all share pretty much the same goals, feelings, sadness and happiness in our life.
But
, unfortunately, we don’t
live
in an ideal world where our limitation as humans and fear of the
unknown
force us to be
sceptical
about trusting a
stranger
.
Needless to say
, I am not immune from this
scepticism
either.

But
, I
still
needed
to
trust
a
stranger
about 5 years ago when my
father
had to go through a critical by-pass
heart
surgery. By the way, my
father
was
already
a 70 years
old
person
back
then, and he had suffered from a massive
heart
attack a few days earlier. Luckily, we were in the hand of a
very
expert
heart
surgeon,
who
assured us that his team would have no problem in having a successful operation on my
father
by the grace of almighty. Having said that,
however
, he
also
warned us at the same
time
that my
father
was
also
in
risk
of losing too much
blood
at the
time
of surgery since he was a
rather
old
man
.
Anyway
, the doctor
also
gave us an
idea
as to how
many
bags
of
blood
would
be required
to
keep
my
father
in a stable condition.

So
, we
started
to
talk
to all of my family members and relatives,
but
unfortunately, we were
still
short of one
blood
bag
.
So
, we decided to contact
some
professional
blood
donors
even though
we heard
a lot of
negative
comments about them earlier.
But
, since, we had no other options
because
my
father
had a
rather
rare
blood
group, we decided to accept his
blood
after running
some
regular
tests
on his health condition.

Luckily, the
blood
transfusion into the body of my
father
,
who
had
just
gone through
some
serious surgery, was successful without any reaction or complication. I and my entire family thanked the
blood
donor from the bottom of our
hearts
. In response, he
simply
said that he was happy to have been able to
help
.
 
Model
Answer
2:

Interesting
topic
indeed
and thank you for allowing me to
talk
about an
event
when I
trusted
a
stranger
! We
sometimes
have to
trust
people
we do not
know
. The outcome of this faith and
trust
varies and trusting a
complete
stranger
is not always a
bad
idea
.
However
, our intuition and experience
tell
us not to rely on a
complete
outsider. Despite this, I believed
people
on
different
occasions and
many
times
they were completely
unknown
to me.

One day, I was on my way to my hometown and our bus
got
delayed. To
add
more misery, on the route, the bus
suddenly
stopped
working in a desolate area. The driver
told
us that the brake of the bus was not
working and
he had to
stop
the
car
to avoid any
risk
.
Some of the
passengers took alternative buses
but
the rest of us
were stuck
there. At least 4-5
hours
were
needed
to repair the bus and waiting that long was not a
good
idea
especially
in this strange place.

All of a sudden a
stranger
approached us and
told
me that we should hire a private
car
and reach our destination. I noticed that he had
already
managed three other passengers
who
had
accepted
his proposition.
However
, when this
person
told
me that the nearest
car
hire service was two miles
away and
we would need to give him $30 per
person
so
that he can pay the money to the
company
and bring the
car
, my gut feeling
told
me not to
trust
him. I asked him to call the
car
rental
company
to pick us, and he replied that he had
already
done
so
and the
car
rental
company
would not
send
the
car
this far without the advance payment. The
stranger
I am talking about was around 35 years
old
and as I recall his name was Stephen.

As per a conversation I had with him, he was a banker. I
trusted
this
stranger
, gave him 30 dollars and waited
dubiously
for an
hour
for him to return. At a
time
during my waiting, I
thought
he would not
show
up at all.
Nevertheless
, after approximately 2
hours
, he
came
back
with a hired
car
and a driver. It was a great relief to me. I laughed
silently
for distrusting this
person
initially
.
However
, it turned out that trusting him was a
good
idea
.

I reached home
just
before
the darkness settled in and thanked this
stranger
, whose name was Stephen, for his initiative to hire a
car
and reach home
before
the night. His plan, stamina, leadership quality and timely decision saved us from the possible
danger
of
being stuck
in an
unknown
place. When the
car
dropped me near my home, the
stranger
had
already
dropped off the
car
. Nonetheless, I thanked him again, this
time
silently
without him noticing my gratitude for his timely decision and action.
 
Sample
Answer
3:

Recently my journey to Australia from Vietnam was a bit difficult. During that
time
, I had to rely on a
stranger
. I would like to
talk
about this
event
when I
trusted
this
unknown
person.

I am a journalist and my office had recently
sent
me to Vietnam to cover
some
news articles.
So
, after completing the tasks in Vietnam, I had to return to Australia. On the way
back
home, I met this
person
. When I entered the Ho Chi Minh City Airport, I
needed
help
, and the
man
lent a helping hand to me. In fact, without his
support
, it was almost impossible for me to
get
rid of the customs and
immigration
troubles.

The
man
, Jacob Abraham was an Australian as
well
. He was a scriptwriter (that I
came
to
know
later) for television commercials. He
also
travelled in Vietnam and was returning on the same day as I was.
He
is on the view that if
someone
is in trouble, it is our moral responsibility to
help
this
person
-
this is what he
told
me when I thanked him for his support.

I guess
I
trusted
him
because
he appeared to be a
complete
gentleman to me.
Some
people
, if not all, can give an impression that you can rely on
them and
he was one such
person
,
I guess
. I was having trouble explaining to one of the customs officers that my stay
was extended
by the
immigration
authority
but
he was not convinced. I had a few
bags
and luggage and it was tough for me to carry them all with me as I
needed
to visit
different
rooms in the
immigration
section. Jacob Abraham, the
person
I am talking about
came
to my rescue. I requested him to look after my
baggage and
he did
so
for about an
hour
-a great
help
for me considering the situation.

Actually
, I had no options
left
rather
than relying on him. It was not possible for me to carry the heavy suitcases and
bags
with me to
clear
the bureaucratic issues related to
immigration
. I
think
he did a great job for me. If it was not for me him, I had to
leave
the luggage unattended! I
profoundly
thanked him for his selfless
help
. We departed at a
time
but
he made my day and I would always remember his
support
.
 
More
Ideas
to
talk
about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card
topic
:
Topic
:
Describe
a
time
when you
trusted
a
stranger
. 1. You
know
how difficult it is to
get
a bus during the rush
hours
in New York
City and
I was
literally
running to
get
on the bus a few days ago.
 
So
, I had to rely on a
complete
stranger
. I asked him to hold my backpack when the bus
started
to
move
. Later, I
came
to
know
that he was Mr Alex and works a few blocks away from my office. I had to
trust
him
because
it was difficult for me to ride on the bus with the backpack.

2. I
love
to travel and
often
need to
trust
outsiders in
different
places.
But
meeting with a
stranger
in Mumbai was completely
different
. I could not
get
the name of this young
boy
. I had to
trust
him
because
I wanted to
get
a picture of me and my wife at a tourist spot in India. After clicking a few shots, the
boys
asked for
money. It was surprising to me though I paid a five-dollar bill to that
boy
. In fact, I had no
idea
that
someone
could demand money for
only
clicking
some
pictures.

3.
Honestly
, I do not
trust
unknown
people
and my experiences are bitter.
But
this
time
, I had to
trust
a
man
named Joseph.
Actually
, I wanted to
get
a
ticket
for a football match in Barcelona and failed to
get
in the queue of the
ticket
booth.
So
, I sought
help
from this
person
. And this gentle and kind
man
got
tickets
for me as he was in the front row. If I went to the queue, I could not have managed
tickets
for that match. Thanks to that
good
fellow.

4. Recently, I went to Berlin and took
supports
from a
stranger
. I lost my purse
accidentally
.
So
, a woman named Alberta
came
to my
help
. I had to
trust
her
because
I had no other options
left
. I stood alone at the station and tried to
get
help
from
someone
to
get
back
home.
Finally
, Alberta approached me. I shared a ride with her and
trusted
her from the
very
beginning.

5. A few days ago, I had to
trust
a
stranger
. The
man
helped
me to avoid
some
unwanted troubles. I could not identify the
man
but
he was cooperative. Without any reason,
some
youths were teasing me on the road. I was returning home from my university and then this
man
came
to my
help
. I
trusted
him and
he saved me from a
bad
situation. He shouted at the
boys
and escorted me to my home. I thanked him for his courage and
support
for me at a crucial moment.
 
If you can
talk
about '
Describe
a
time
when you
trusted
a stranger', you
are supposed
to be able to
answer
the following
topics: 1
.
Describe
a
time
when
someone
helped
you.

2.
Describe
a
time
when you
helped
someone. 3
.
Talk
about an
event
when
someone
came
at your rescue.

4.
Describe
an
event
when you sought
help
from
someone
you did not
know
.
19Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
223Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe a time when you trusted a stranger. v. 1

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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