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Describe a thing you bought for which you had to save money. v.1

Describe a thing you bought for which you had to save money. v. 1
Describe a thing you bought for which you had to save money. You should say:  what it was  how long you saved money for it  how you saved the money and explain how you felt after you bought it.
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Describe
a thing you
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bought
for which you had to save money. You should say:
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what it was
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how long you saved money for it
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how you saved the money and
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explain
how you felt after you
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bought
it.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe a thing you bought for which you had to save money. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
1 paragraphs
39 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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