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Describe a skill you want to learn. v.1

Describe a skill you want to learn. v. 1
Describe a skill you want to learn. You should say:     What it is     Why you think it is important     How you are going to learn it and explain why you want to learn this skill. Sample Answer: If I ever get the chance to learn a new skill, I would like to learn karate which is a form of martial art. I had a great fascination and attraction to learn it but never had the chance actually to learn it. This is important for keeping a sound body and to remain fit. It is also a great weapon of self-defence in time of adversity and sudden attack by rogue people. The greatest benefit this karate offers is a discipline and self-control. Besides the physical exercise, patience and hard work karate requires a great deal of mental power, calmness and a type of discipline which are necessary for a modest life. If I get the chance, I would get admitted in a good karate learning training centre that would offer a really good training so that I can efficiently learn it. I will need to devote a great deal of regular time and will have to have the determination to learn the necessary skill. I would like to get involve in some kind of activity which is helpful to keep the body and soul sound. Physical exercise is one way to do that but karate would be more helpful as it would require steady patience and determination as well. I have found some of my friends and relatives found it very helpful in their lives and I was inspired by their discussion regarding the usefulness of this martial art. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe a skill or quality you have.   Describe something you plan to learn in the future.   Describe one of your friends who has a positive quality or special skill.   Describe a technically skilled person you know about.   Describe a skill you wish you had.
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skill
you want to
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learn
. You should say:
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What it is
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Why you
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think
it is
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important
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How you are going to
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learn
it and
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explain
why you want to
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learn
this
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skill
. Sample Answer:

If I ever
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get
the chance to
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learn
a new
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skill
, I would like to
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learn
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karate
which is a form of martial art. I had a
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great
fascination and attraction to
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learn
it
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but
never had the chance
actually
to
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learn
it. This is
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important
for keeping a sound body and to remain fit. It is
also
a
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great
weapon of
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self-defence
in time of adversity and sudden attack by rogue
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people
.

The greatest benefit this
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karate
offers is a discipline and self-control.
Besides
the physical exercise, patience and
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hard
work
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karate
requires a
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great
deal of mental power, calmness and a type of discipline which are necessary for a modest life.

If I
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get
the chance, I would
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get
admitted in a
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good
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karate
learning
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training
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centre
that would offer a
really
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good
training
so
that I can
efficiently
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learn
it. I will need to devote a
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great
deal of regular time and will
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have to
have the determination to
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learn
the necessary
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skill
.

I would like to
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get
involve in
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some
kind of activity which is helpful to
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keep
the body and soul sound. Physical exercise is one way to do that
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but
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karate
would be more helpful as it would require steady patience and determination as
well
. I have found
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some
of my friends and relatives found it
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very
helpful in their
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lives and
I
was inspired
by their discussion regarding the usefulness of this martial art.

Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
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Describe
a
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skill
or quality you have.
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Describe
something you plan to
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learn
in the future.
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Describe
one of your friends who
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has
a
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positive
quality or special
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skill
.
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Describe
a
technically
skilled person
you know
about.
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Describe
a
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skill
you wish you had.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
31Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a skill you want to learn. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
6 paragraphs
353 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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