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Describe a person with whom you like to work or study. v.1

Describe a person with whom you like to work or study. v. 1
Describe a person with whom you like to work or study. You should say:  who this person is  where you work/study together  what you often do together and explain why you like so much to work/study with him/her.   Model Answer 1: I have been lucky to work with a number of great and brilliant co-workers, who would never hesitate to help out other people in need, be it at their workplace or outside of their workplace. Today, I would like to talk about one of those persons who I really like to work with. His name is Nehal Mithun. I have known Nehal for some times after he joined our company about a couple of years ago. In the beginning, of course, Nehal used to work in a different department than mine, so I didn’t really get much opportunity to learn about him, even though we occasionally talked to each other. But, after Nehal got transferred to my department, which is operations management, as a Senior Executive, I realized how great and productive of any employee Nehal really is. In fact, I would say that Nehal is one of the most multi-talented persons I have ever met. His time management skill is impeccable since I have never really seen him failing in his deadline whether preparing a complex quarterly management report for the upper management or delivering a new product design which caters to the current market trends and consumer needs. Nehal is also equally skilled and able to boost up the morale of the staffs when the company passes through a tough time. By the way, apart from preparing reports and designing company products together at a large electronics manufacturing company, I and Nehal like to hang out together also from time to time at a café or restaurant. We also hit our favourite shopping mall to find and buy different kinds of products on discount. Anyway, I like to work so much with Nehal, primarily because he always has a natural gift to make any kinds of difficult things and situation easy. Unlike many people, Nehal always enjoys his job since he always somehow manages to bring new ideas into our work and company. Besides, I like to work with Nehal so much also because he doesn’t only enjoy his work, but also he enjoys his life whenever he gets and opportunity.   Sample Answer 2: I have many colleagues and co-workers whom I think to be very proactive and talented and among them, I would like to mention (…say a name…) whom I really enjoy working with. I have been working with him for the last 2 years and during this time I have always found him to be very talented, focused and deadline-oriented co-workers. With him, all of my assignments and tasks were completed with perfect harmony and time. Since both of us work in the same office, we work for the same company but we often work on different projects. When we both are assigned to the same project, we work almost most of the office time together. In the office, we mostly spend our time like two good colleagues and besides this, he has become a good friend of mine. We often go to a lake to have some fresh air, we go to a restaurant to have our lunch and sometimes we meet other friends. In the office, we often discuss the tasks and share our opinion on how to solve an emerging issue. I like to work with him mostly because of his pro-activeness and talent. He is a very good problem solver and always shows a professional and positive attitude to address a solution. He is a good team member and can work really hard to solve a problem. Apart from those qualities, he is a good listener and knows when to talk and when to remain silent. These are some great and exemplary qualities someone would seek from a team member and because of all these good qualities I enjoy and like to work with him.
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a
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person
with whom you like to
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work
or study. You should say:
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who this
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person
is
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where you work/study together
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what you
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often
do together and
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explain
why you like
so
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much
to work/study with him/her.
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Model Answer 1:

I have been lucky to
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work
with a number of great and brilliant co-workers, who would never hesitate to
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help
out other
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people
in need, be it at their workplace or
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outside of
their workplace.
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Today
, I would like to talk about one of those
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persons
who I
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really
like to
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work
with.

His name is
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Nehal
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Mithun
. I have known
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Nehal
for
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some
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times
after he
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joined
our
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company
about a couple of years ago. In the beginning,
of course
,
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Nehal
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used
to
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work
in a
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different
department than mine,
so
I didn’t
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really
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get
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much
opportunity to learn about him,
even though
we
occasionally
talked to each other.
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But
, after
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Nehal
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got
transferred to my department, which is operations
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management
, as a Senior Executive, I realized how great and productive of any employee
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Nehal
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really
is.

In fact, I would say that
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Nehal
is one of the most multi-talented
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persons
I have ever met. His
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time
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management
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skill
is impeccable since I have never
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really
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seen
him failing in his deadline whether preparing a complex quarterly
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management
report for the upper
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management
or delivering a new product design which caters to the
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current
market trends and consumer needs.
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Nehal
is
also
equally
skilled and able to boost up the morale of the staffs when the
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company
passes through a tough
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time
. By the way, apart from preparing reports and designing
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company
products together at a large electronics manufacturing
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company
, I and
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Nehal
like to hang out together
also
from
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time
to
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time
at a café or restaurant. We
also
hit our
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favourite
shopping mall to find and
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buy
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different
kinds of products on discount.

Anyway
, I like to
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work
so
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much
with
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Nehal
,
primarily
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because
he always has a natural gift to
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make
any kinds of difficult things and situation easy. Unlike
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many
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people
,
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Nehal
always
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enjoys
his job since he always somehow manages to bring new
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ideas
into our
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work
and
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company
.
Besides
, I like to
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work
with
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Nehal
so
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much
also
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because
he doesn’t
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only
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enjoy
his
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work
,
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but
also
he
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enjoys
his life whenever he
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gets
and opportunity.
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Sample Answer 2:

I have
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many
colleagues and co-workers whom I
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think
to be
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very
proactive and talented and among them, I would like to mention (…say a name…) whom I
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really
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enjoy
working with. I have been working with him for the last 2 years and during this
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time
I have always found him to be
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very
talented, focused and deadline-oriented co-workers. With him, all of my assignments and tasks
were completed
with perfect harmony and time.

Since both of us
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work
in the same
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office
, we
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work
for the same
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company
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but
we
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often
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work
on
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different
projects. When we both
are assigned
to the same project, we
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work
almost most of the
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office
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time
together.

In the
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office
, we
mostly
spend our
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time
like two
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good
colleagues and
besides
this, he has become a
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good
friend of mine. We
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often
go to a lake to have
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some
fresh air, we go to a restaurant to have our lunch and
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sometimes
we
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meet
other friends. In the
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office
, we
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often
discuss the tasks and share our opinion on how to solve an emerging issue. I like to
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work
with him
mostly
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because
of his pro-activeness and talent. He is a
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very
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good
problem solver and always
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shows
a professional and
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positive
attitude to address a solution. He is a
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good
team member and can
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work
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really
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hard
to solve a problem. Apart from those qualities, he is a
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good
listener and knows when to talk and when to remain silent. These are
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some
great and exemplary qualities someone would seek from a team member and
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because
of all these
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good
qualities I
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enjoy
and like to
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work
with him.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
66Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a person with whom you like to work or study. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
8 paragraphs
677 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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