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Describe a prize you have ever won. v.1

Describe a prize you have ever won. v. 1
Describe a prize you have ever won. You should say: what it was what you had to do to win it how many other competitors were there and explain how you felt after winning it. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer 1: I haven’t really won that many things in my life, perhaps because I haven’t really been that competitive in life. However, there were a few occasions when I managed to win a thing or two by defying all the odds, and today I would like to share one such story. The prize, I won, was a “book” when I was a high school student about 12 years ago. I wasn’t exactly a very bright student during my high school days, but, I still somehow managed to get an admission at one of the best government high schools in my country. It was all good at my high school, but it certainly had a different culture as everything was very competitive there. Even meeting new friends or mingling with other fellow students was not an easy thing to do, especially, for an average student like me. So, I was essentially a “backbencher” or some kind of “outcast” there. Feeling a bit dejected, I wanted to prove something – my worth- to them.   So, I started to wait for an opportunity, and it came on my way after almost waiting for 6 months in the form of an “essay” writing competition. It was an open competition, so all of my fellow brilliant classmates were able to take part in it. Anyway, we had only two days to submit the essay, so I forgot about eating or taking a shower in order to collect enough information on the essay writing skills and techniques.   Finally, after a marathon 2-day effort, I did submit my essay and wished to achieve some “big” success, and I wasn’t disappointed as I got the 2nd best prize in that essay writing competition. Anyway, after winning the competition, I felt like I was flying to the moon with so much joy and happiness. In fact, it was for the first time, I felt that I could actually be as good as any other person if I really had tried hard. Besides, after winning my first-ever prize, I felt like I earned some “bragging rights” to boast about my success among my friends.   Sample Answer 2: My participation in a chess competition brought me one of the best prizes in my life and I am going to tell you about this event and the award I won. The competition was held in my college in Berlin, Germany around three years ago. The chess competition was arranged marking the annual sports events. Though several other contests were included in this event, I picked chess for my love and passion for the game. I would like to thank you for letting me talk about it. The battle of the mind is one of the most exclusive types of war, I believe and this is more prevalent in a gaming competition. I had to compete and outwit my competitors in several stages to win the competition. The first stage of competition began in the morning and ended by noon. The final completion held after lunch and ended in the evening. I got a break when I tried to reshape my ideas and start again with vigour and determination to become the champion the next day. But fighting the competitors with outstanding talents and skills was extremely difficult. In fact, they were highly intelligent and expert in playing chess. Among the other competition, chess was comparatively less preferred by the competitors. There were several reasons for ignoring chess. I think the sluggish nature of the game discouraged to take up on the competition. So, we were eight players altogether in the entire competition. Each of the players was skilled and knew how to manipulate the game. The capacity to influence the thought of rivals was truly amazing. A blanket of joy surrounded me after winning the prize in chess competition. I defeated the former champion and became the new champion of inter-department chess championship of our college. I was proud of my victory. I underwent huge stress around two days to participate in the competition. My parents were happy to learn that I became the new champion. The victory and winning the prize was a remarkable event in my life. To illustrate the prize, it was insignificant compared to the achievement. The real reward is in the glory of the title, not the money or the trophy. However, I still have the trophy and I used the prize money, which was 500 euros, to buy some books and gifts for my parents and my young sister.     More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card topic: Cue Card Topic: Describe a prize you have ever won. 1. Recently I took part in a video game completion. The competition took place at my college in China and I participated in a racing game. It took around twenty minutes for me to complete the entire race and I won the third prize. It was quite an exhilarating experience for me, especially because the competition included a game that I was good at. 2. My pet has brought me a grand prize this year at the annual pet show held in Frankfurt. I have a pet dog, Tom, and I trained it gradually aiming to take part in the competition. I am happy to win this prize. 3. The annual badminton completion in my college, here in New York City, took place last month and I was a participant. I won the second prize in the tournament. It was tough to beat the other contestants and I was so happy to become one of the winners. 4. When I was a school student in Montreal, Canada, I got a prize for art and craft activities. The project aimed to increase the capacity of the students and so, there was no specific theme at all. I won several other prizes afterwards but this was one the most inspiring for me as a child. 5. I took part in an online competition and it was for to be mothers. By answering all the questions correctly, I won a prize. It was a spa treatment for free of cost near the outskirts of Thailand. I was overwhelmed with joy. 6. After submitting a photo in a photography competition, I won a prize. Actually, it was a recognition for me. Though I am a fashion photographer in Spain now, my passion for photography intensified after winning the prize. 7. Our college in Mumbai organized for an annual competition, and I took part as a singer. To my utter surprise, I was awarded a nice complimentary prize for my performance. I was glad indeed with the prize. 8. Winning the first prize is really impressive, and I won it just a few months ago. It was a camping event and I took the lead for the hiking team. For my successful accomplishment, the college authority awarded me the prize. 9. I have got a two-night hotel stay for my successful answers to a quiz competition. Now I am planning to visit Thailand to avail the reward and I am going to take in next month. In fact, this is the award I won in ages and all others are dated back to my high school days.   Your preparation for this cue card topic would help you talk about the following topics as well: 1. Describe a recent happy event. 2. Describe something you own which is important to you. 3. Describe a prize or gift that you really like. 4. Describe something you want to own. 5. Describe something you have recently bought. 6. Describe an event when you were congratulated. 7. Describe a competition you took part in.
Describe
a
prize
you have ever won. You should say: what it was what you had to do to
win
it how
many
other
competitors
were there and
explain
how you
felt
after
winning
it. [You will
have to
talk
about the
topic
for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
think
about what you are going to say. You can
make
some
notes to
help
you if you wish.
]
 
Model Answer 1:

I haven’t
really
won that
many
things in my life, perhaps
because
I haven’t
really
been that competitive in life.
However
, there were a few occasions when I managed to
win
a thing or two by defying all the odds, and
today
I would like to share one such story.

The
prize
, I won, was a “book” when I was a
high
school
student
about 12 years ago. I wasn’t exactly a
very
bright
student
during my
high
school
days,
but
, I
still
somehow managed to
get
an admission at one of the best
government
high
schools
in my country. It was all
good
at my
high
school
,
but
it
certainly
had a
different
culture as everything was
very
competitive there. Even meeting
new
friends or mingling with
other
fellow
students
was not an easy thing to do,
especially
, for an average
student
like me.

So
, I was
essentially
a “
backbencher
” or
some
kind of “outcast” there. Feeling a bit dejected, I wanted to prove
something
my worth- to them.
 
So
, I
started
to wait for an opportunity, and it came on my way after almost waiting for 6
months
in the form of an
“essay”
writing
competition
. It was an open
competition
,
so
all of my fellow brilliant classmates were able to take
part
in it.

Anyway
, we had
only
two days to submit the
essay
,
so
I forgot about eating or taking a shower in order to collect
enough
information on the
essay
writing
skills
and techniques.
 
Finally
, after a marathon 2-day effort, I did submit my
essay
and wished to achieve
some
big
” success, and I wasn’t disappointed as I
got
the 2nd best
prize
in that
essay
writing competition.

Anyway
, after
winning
the
competition
, I
felt
like I was flying to the moon with
so
much joy and happiness. In fact, it was for the
first
time, I
felt
that I could
actually
be as
good
as any
other
person if I
really
had tried
hard
.
Besides
, after
winning
my
first
-ever
prize
, I
felt
like I earned
some
“bragging rights” to boast about my success among my friends.
 
Sample Answer 2:

My participation in a chess
competition
brought me one of the best
prizes
in my
life and
I am going to
tell
you about this
event
and the award I won. The
competition
was held
in my college in Berlin, Germany around three years ago. The chess
competition
was arranged
marking the annual sports
events
. Though several
other
contests
were included
in this
event
, I picked chess for my
love
and passion for the game. I would like to thank you for letting me
talk
about it.

The battle of the mind is one of the most exclusive types of war, I believe and this is more prevalent in a gaming
competition
. I had to compete and outwit my
competitors
in several stages to
win
the
competition
. The
first
stage of
competition
began in the morning and ended by noon. The final completion held after lunch and ended in the evening. I
got
a break when I tried to reshape my
ideas
and
start
again with
vigour
and determination to become the
champion
the
next
day.
But
fighting the
competitors
with outstanding talents and
skills
was
extremely
difficult. In fact, they were
highly
intelligent and expert in playing chess.

Among the
other
competition
, chess was
comparatively
less preferred by the
competitors
. There were several reasons for ignoring chess. I
think
the sluggish nature of the game discouraged to take up on the
competition
.
So
, we were eight players altogether in the entire
competition
. Each of the players
was skilled
and knew how to manipulate the game. The capacity to influence the
thought
of rivals was
truly
amazing.

A blanket of joy surrounded me after
winning
the
prize
in chess
competition
. I defeated the former
champion
and became the
new
champion
of inter-department chess championship of our college. I was proud of my victory.
I
underwent huge
stress
around two days to participate in the
competition
. My parents were
happy
to learn that I became the
new
champion
. The victory and
winning
the
prize
was a remarkable
event
in my life.

To illustrate the
prize
, it was insignificant compared to the achievement. The real reward is in the glory of the title, not the money or the trophy.
However
, I
still
have the trophy and I
used
the
prize
money, which was 500 euros, to
buy
some
books and gifts for my parents and my young sister.
   
More
Ideas
to
talk
about this Cue Card
topic
: Cue Card
Topic
:
Describe
a
prize
you have ever won. 1. Recently I
took
part
in a video game completion. The
competition
took
place at my college in China and I participated in a racing game. It
took
around twenty minutes for me to complete the entire race and I won the third
prize
. It was quite an exhilarating experience for me,
especially
because
the
competition
included a game that I was
good
at.

2. My pet has brought me a grand
prize
this year at the annual pet
show
held in Frankfurt. I have a pet dog, Tom, and I trained it
gradually
aiming to take
part
in the
competition
. I am
happy
to
win
this
prize. 3
. The annual badminton completion in my college, here in
New
York City,
took
place last
month and
I was a participant. I won the second
prize
in the tournament. It was tough to beat the
other
contestants and
I was
so
happy
to become one of the winners.

4. When I was a
school
student
in Montreal, Canada, I
got
a
prize
for art and craft activities. The project aimed to increase the capacity of the
students
and
so
, there was no specific theme at all. I won several
other
prizes
afterwards
but
this was
one
the most inspiring for me as a child.

5. I
took
part
in an online
competition
and it was for to be mothers. By answering all the questions
correctly
, I won a
prize
. It was a spa treatment for free of cost near the outskirts of Thailand. I
was overwhelmed
with joy.

6. After submitting a photo in a photography
competition
, I won a
prize
.
Actually
, it was a recognition for me. Though I am a fashion photographer in Spain
now
, my passion for photography intensified after
winning
the
prize. 7
. Our college in Mumbai organized for an annual
competition
, and I
took
part
as a singer. To my utter surprise, I
was awarded
a nice complimentary
prize
for my performance. I was glad
indeed
with the
prize. 8
.
Winning
the
first
prize
is
really
impressive, and I won it
just
a few
months
ago. It was a camping
event
and I
took
the lead for the hiking team. For my successful accomplishment, the college authority awarded me the
prize. 9
. I have
got
a two-night hotel stay for my successful answers to a quiz
competition
.
Now
I am planning to visit Thailand to avail the
reward and
I am going to take in
next
month
. In fact, this is the award I won in ages and all others
are dated
back to my
high
school
days.
 
Your preparation for this cue card
topic
would
help
you
talk
about the following
topics
as
well
:

1.
Describe
a recent
happy
event. 2
.
Describe
something
you
own
which is
important
to you.

3.
Describe
a
prize
or gift that you
really
like.

4.
Describe
something
you want to
own
.

5.
Describe
something
you have recently
bought
.

6.
Describe
an
event
when you
were congratulated
.

7.
Describe
a
competition
you
took
part
in.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
162Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe a prize you have ever won. v. 1

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1359 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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