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Describe a noisy place you have been to. v.1

Describe a noisy place you have been to. v. 1
Describe a noisy place you have been to. You should say: where it was why you went there why it was noisy and explain how you felt about being there. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you’re going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer 1: Where I live in my country, dealing with some kind of noises is a daily thing, simply because I live in a rather densely populated country. Of course, some places can be noisier than others, and today, I would like about one of those more noisy places, I visited in the past. The noisy place, I am talking about, is a “rail station”. But it was not just like any other rail station as it was the biggest one in my country.   In fact, the station could hold about 30 trains at any given time, and it was very easy for a person to make mistake with his or her train if he or she didn’t know the proper platform number for his/her train. By the way, the station was also used to connect with the rest of the country. Anyway, I had visited the same rail station, full of noise, a number of times in the past, but when I visited it about a few years ago in order to pick up one of my friends from another town, the noise was even more deafening, probably because there were some major schedule debacles. Of course, the rail station was already noisy enough with thousands of passengers, either arriving at the station or departing from it. On top of that, there were also the sounds of the moving trains, which were either arriving at the station or departing from it, to make the noise situation even worse. Then, there were also the sounds of the conversation of thousands of passengers along with the sounds of their luggage carrying trolleys. After arriving at the station, I felt like I was about to lose my hearing and ears. At some point, I even felt like shouting to the people at the rail station and ask them to stop talking just for a minute, but I knew very well that it was not going to work because waving goodbye to their loved ones or meeting them with joy and happiness was more important to them than paying attention to me!   Sample Answer 2: My recent Hong Kong trip made me familiar with some of the noisy places there. I went shopping at a local street market after knowing about the features but experienced with extreme noise that I failed to tolerate to some extent. And I never had this type of experience before. I went to Stanley Market in the city to get some necessary items I forgot to bring from my home in Australia. This is a great cue card task for me. I will love answering the remaining questions. I went to Hong Kong for some commercial purposes and it was about setting up a branch of my office there. The trip was interesting and I came to know about numerous matters that I did not know before. Someone from the hotel told me to visit the street markets to get the necessary things. Accordingly, I paid the visit and experienced the noise. But luckily I got my stuff at a cheaper price. The place was noisy for several reasons. First of all, it was a street market and thus it was crowded. People from around the city gathered there to get their things. A lot of street shops were there laden with various types of goods. All of the people present at the market were talking and the sounds were intolerable to some extent. The people who have not been at the market will not understand the noise. At a point, it appeared that the entire place was filled with life. Initially, I was uncomfortable amid the noise. The sellers and buyers were trying to convince each other and some of the sellers were shouting across the market after the search of potential customers. But after passing about one hour in the market, I tried to adjust to the situation.   More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card topic: Cue Card Topic: Describe a noisy place you have been to. 1. I went to North East Lincolnshire, and that was a clamorous place indeed. I went to meet a college friend of mine to make some notes on an upcoming exam. It was noisy because of excessive traffic and people on the streets. I felt irritating amid the unbearable sound. 2. Detroit in Michigan presented me with the example of dissonance I have never been to. The entire city was bustling with noise. I went there for some official purposes and found each of the streets filled with different types of vehicles. They were making unnecessary sounds. Finally, I immediately left the area being annoyed. 3. New Delhi is the noisiest place in the entire country. I had to visit the land to attend a conference that was held in New Delhi and I went there a couple of weeks ago. The streets were occupied by people and cars. Nobody seemed to follow the traffic rules. Car horns, social events and noise from other sources made it unbearable. I felt being in a very crowded place after spending two days there. 4. It was a nice opportunity to enjoy a firework show in Australia marking the New Year celebration last year. I actually went to Australia to spend my winter vacation. I wanted to enjoy the firework show and attend one. The loud noise made from burning the fireworks created the louder outcry. But I was not ready to accept such a commotion. I felt upset greatly amid the noise. 5. Wellington appeared as a noisy place to me in New Zealand. I went there for recreational purposes. The city is clamorous for the rapid urbanization and other noise creating sources like construction in the residential area. It gave me a bitter experience and it was beyond my imagination. 6. Noise pollution in Singapore is a usual issue today but I am not experienced with it. I went to Singapore last summer to spend a vacation with my family. After visiting the street market, I realized how noisy it was. People were shouting for no reasons to sell their products. But I did not appreciate the ways of marketing and selling products. I rather felt truly uncomfortable. 7. Tokyo is a metropolitan city but filled with numerous types of commotion. I went to attend some business conference there last month. The entire city is filled with loudspeakers, construction activities, commercial activities, and factories. Thereby, it was too noisy. I actually did not like the city environment indeed. 8. My last visit to Madrid in Spain offered me a bitter experience. It was a noisy place in all senses. I wanted to see a live football match there and stayed for three days in the city. Most of the sound was created by the nightclubs and nightlife. Streets are filled with people and vehicles creating noise. I have never seen such a noisy place before. If you can talk about this cue card topic, you should be able to answer the following topics as well: 1. Describe a crowded place you have visited. 2. Talk about a place where a lot of people gather. 3. Describe a place in your hometown. 4. Describe a place you have visited and did not like.
Describe
a
noisy
place
you have been to. You should say: where it was why you
went
there why it was
noisy
and
explain
how you
felt
about being there. [You will
have to
talk
about the
topic
for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
think
about what you’re going to say. You can
make
some
notes to
help
you if you wish.
]
 
Model Answer 1:

Where I
live
in my
country
, dealing with
some
kind of
noises
is a daily thing,
simply
because
I
live
in a
rather
densely
populated
country
.
Of course
,
some
places
can be noisier than others, and
today
, I would like about one of those more
noisy
places
, I
visited
in the past.

The
noisy
place
, I am talking about, is a
“rail
station”
.
But
it was not
just
like any
other
rail
station
as it was the biggest one in my
country
.
 
In fact, the
station
could hold about 30 trains at any
given
time, and it was
very
easy for a person to
make
mistake with
his or her
train if he or she didn’t know the proper platform number for his/her train.

By the way, the
station
was
also
used
to connect with the rest of the
country
.
Anyway
, I had
visited
the same
rail
station
, full of
noise
, a number of times in the past,
but
when I
visited
it about a few years ago in order to pick up one of my friends from another town, the
noise
was even more deafening,
probably
because
there were
some
major schedule debacles.

Of course
, the
rail
station
was already
noisy
enough
with thousands of passengers, either arriving at the
station
or departing from it.
On top of that
, there were
also
the
sounds
of the moving trains, which were either arriving at the
station
or departing from it, to
make
the
noise
situation even worse. Then, there were
also
the
sounds
of the conversation of thousands of passengers along with the
sounds
of their luggage carrying trolleys.

After arriving at the
station
, I
felt
like I was about to lose my hearing and ears. At
some
point, I even
felt
like shouting to the
people
at the
rail
station
and ask them to
stop
talking
just
for a minute,
but
I knew
very
well
that it was not going to work
because
waving goodbye to their
loved
ones or meeting them with joy and happiness was more
important
to them than paying attention to me!
 
Sample Answer 2:

My recent Hong Kong trip made me familiar with
some of the
noisy
places
there. I
went
shopping at a local
street
market
after knowing about the features
but
experienced with extreme
noise
that I failed to tolerate to
some
extent. And I never had this
type
of experience
before
. I
went
to Stanley
Market
in the city to
get
some
necessary items I forgot to bring from my home in Australia. This is a great
cue
card
task for me. I will
love
answering the remaining questions.

I
went
to Hong Kong for
some
commercial purposes and it was about setting up a branch of my office there. The trip was interesting and I came to know about numerous matters that I did not know
before
. Someone from the hotel
told
me to
visit
the
street
markets to
get
the necessary things.
Accordingly
, I paid the
visit
and experienced the
noise
.
But
luckily I
got
my stuff at a cheaper price.

The
place
was
noisy
for several reasons.
First of all
, it was a
street
market
and
thus
it
was crowded
.
People
from around the city gathered there to
get
their things.
A lot of
street
shops were there laden with various
types
of
goods
.
All of the
people
present at the
market
were talking and the
sounds
were intolerable to
some
extent. The
people
who have not been at the
market
will not understand the
noise
. At a point, it appeared that the
entire
place
was
filled
with life.

Initially
, I was uncomfortable amid the
noise
. The sellers and buyers were trying to convince each
other
and
some of the
sellers were shouting across the
market
after the search of potential customers.
But
after passing about one hour in the
market
, I tried to adjust to the situation.
 
More
Ideas
to
talk
about this
Cue
Card
topic
:
Cue
Card
Topic
:
Describe
a
noisy
place
you have been to. 1. I
went
to North East
Lincolnshire
, and that was a clamorous
place
indeed
. I
went
to
meet
a college friend of mine to
make
some
notes on an upcoming exam. It was
noisy
because
of excessive traffic and
people
on the
streets
. I
felt
irritating amid the unbearable
sound. 2
. Detroit in Michigan presented me with the example of dissonance I have never been to. The
entire
city was bustling with
noise
. I
went
there for
some
official purposes and found each of the
streets
filled
with
different
types
of vehicles. They were making unnecessary
sounds
.
Finally
, I immediately
left
the area
being annoyed
.

3.
New
Delhi is the noisiest
place
in the
entire
country
. I had to
visit
the land to attend a conference that
was held
in
New
Delhi and I
went
there a couple of weeks ago. The
streets
were occupied
by
people
and cars. Nobody seemed to follow the traffic
rules
. Car horns, social
events
and
noise
from
other
sources made it unbearable. I
felt
being in a
very
crowded
place
after spending two days there.

4. It was a nice opportunity to enjoy a firework
show
in Australia marking the
New
Year celebration last year. I
actually
went
to Australia to spend my winter vacation. I wanted to enjoy the firework
show
and attend one. The loud
noise
made from burning the fireworks created the louder outcry.
But
I was not ready to accept such a commotion. I
felt
upset
greatly
amid the
noise. 5
. Wellington appeared as a
noisy
place
to me in
New
Zealand. I
went
there for recreational purposes. The city is clamorous for the rapid urbanization and
other
noise
creating sources like construction in the residential area. It gave me a bitter experience and it was beyond my imagination.

6.
Noise
pollution in Singapore is a usual issue
today
but
I am not experienced with it. I
went
to Singapore last summer to spend a vacation with my family. After visiting the
street
market
, I realized how
noisy
it was.
People
were shouting for no reasons to sell their products.
But
I did not appreciate the ways of marketing and selling products. I
rather
felt
truly
uncomfortable.

7. Tokyo is a metropolitan city
but
filled
with numerous
types
of commotion. I
went
to attend
some
business conference there last month. The
entire
city is
filled
with loudspeakers, construction activities, commercial activities, and factories. Thereby, it was too
noisy
. I
actually
did not like the city environment
indeed
.

8. My last
visit
to Madrid in Spain offered me a bitter experience. It was a
noisy
place
in all senses. I wanted to
see
a
live
football match there and stayed for three days in the city. Most of the
sound
was created
by the nightclubs and nightlife.
Streets
are
filled
with
people
and vehicles creating
noise
. I have never
seen
such a
noisy
place
before
.

If you can
talk
about this
cue
card
topic
, you should be able to answer the following
topics
as
well
: 1.
Describe
a crowded
place
you have
visited. 2
.
Talk
about a
place
where
a lot of
people
gather.

3.
Describe
a
place
in your hometown.

4.
Describe
a
place
you have
visited
and did not like.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
175Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a noisy place you have been to. v. 1

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  American English
21 paragraphs
1285 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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