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Describe a social networking website/platform you use. v.1

Describe a social networking website/platform you use. v. 1
Describe a social networking website/platform you use. You should say: what it is why you use it what benefits it offers and explain how this social networking website helps you. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer: Facebook is one of the most used social networking services and popular among the users for some of its unique features. The most impressive feature of this platform is that it is free and the users can make both audio and video calls for free of cost. It also helps to share life with the peer users. This is a great candidate task card topic and I am happy to have it in my share. I would like to thank you for the opportunity and time to let me talk about this. Honestly, I use Facebook for communicating with my friends and relatives who live far away from me. It also helps me to communicate with some other people and share my recent happening with them in terms of text status or by uploading photographs. In fact, this is the social networking service that has helped me in a number of ways and I can reach to anyone who has an account with the network. Before using this social networking service, it was really difficult to communicate. And obviously, communication was an expensive matter too. But with the use of this networking website, I easily can share my thoughts, photos, and many other matters. Besides, the students of my university in Tianjin, China, are using this website as a platform for gathering opinions from the fellow students on various socio-economic issues. This is a user-friendly website and requires less knowledge to maintain an account. I am benefitted with the website in numerous ways. Browsing the website, I come to know about the latest happenings in the world. Actually, this has become a great virtual space where people share their respective events to let the others know. It also helps to play role in different local and international matters. It also helps to stay in touch with the near and dear people all the time. More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe a social networking website/platform you use. 1. The number of Facebook users is on the rise in the UK. This is a very good platform to share our emotions and feelings. I mostly use it to connect with my friends and family. The most important benefit of Facebook is that I can remain in touch with my fellow men. It helps me to know about the latest updates of my family and friends. I also use the platform to share my feelings and dreams. Besides, this is a great way to pass leisurely hours. 2. Twitter is a great social networking website in the USA. I use it to share my thoughts. It is highly beneficial for me. The tweets I make get immediate attention from all over the world. This is a speedy medium to share something. The website is helpful for me in different perspectives. I use this platform to inform about the latest updates of technology. 3. In India, Shtyle is a newly launched social networking website. I use it to create my own avatar. This is great fun indeed. It has a virtual room where someone can create their own avatar. Gaming on the rooms is highly thrilling. Using this website, I can get connected with gamers. Besides, it also helps to expand my imagination by creating the avatar of mine. 4. Application of social platforms is a bit different in China. Here I use WeChat for social communication. It contains almost all the modern features of present social networking websites. So, I love using it. It offers a wide range of benefits to users. It helps to post on the wall, arrange taxi service and many other daily activities. I am greatly benefitted from this app. I use it to share my moments with friends, chat with other people and much more. 5. Tumbler is a microblogging website. This has occupied a great position in Malaysia. I use the site for several purposes. I am mostly benefitted that I can make some small notes to share with my network. I do not need to waste more time on photo selection or other activities. It also allows the users to follow the other bloggers and get to know about their status. It helps me to express my sudden feelings. In fact, I am not a skilled blogger and use this just to share what I think. 6. Linkedin is a wonderful social networking site. I mostly use the site to know about jobs and other purposes. The website is mostly used by professionals of different working sectors. They post jobs and offers for others. Honestly, I have got my current job using this website. I had been seeking a job for me near Sydney and got this one after knowing about it from the website. If you can talk about this cue card topic, you should be able to answer the following topics as well: 1. Describe your favourite website. 2. Describe a website you often browse. 3. Describe a useful website you have recently browsed. 4. Describe an application of software you use on your mobile phone. 5. Describe a website or software you find useful to connect with others.
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a
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social
networking website/platform you
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use
. You should say: what it is why you
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use
it what benefits it offers and
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explain
how this
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social
networking
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website
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helps
you. [You will
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have to
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talk
about the
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topic
for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you're going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
Sample Answer:

Facebook is one of the most
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used
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social
networking
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services
and popular among the
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users
for
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some
of its unique features. The most impressive feature of this
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platform
is that it is free and the
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users
can
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make
both audio and video calls for free of cost. It
also
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helps
to
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share
life with the peer
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users
. This is a
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great
candidate task card
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topic and
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share
. I would like to thank you for the opportunity and time to
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let
me
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talk
about this.

Honestly
, I
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use
Facebook for communicating with my
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friends
and relatives who
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live
far away from me. It
also
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helps
me to communicate with
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some
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other
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people
and
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share
my recent happening
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with
them in terms of text status or by uploading photographs. In fact, this is the
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social
networking
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service
that has
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helped
me in a number of ways and I can reach to anyone who has an account with the network.

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Before
using this
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social
networking
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service
, it was
really
difficult to communicate. And
obviously
, communication was an expensive matter too.
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But
with the
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use
of this networking
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website
, I
easily
can
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share
my thoughts, photos, and
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many
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other
matters.
Besides
, the students of my university in Tianjin, China, are using this
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website
as a
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platform
for gathering opinions from the fellow students on various
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socio-economic
issues. This is a user-friendly
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website
and requires less knowledge to maintain an account.

I am
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benefitted
with the
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website
in numerous ways. Browsing the
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website
, I
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come
to
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know
about the latest happenings in the world.
Actually
, this has become a
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great
virtual space where
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people
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share
their respective
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events
to
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let
the others
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know
. It
also
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helps
to play role in
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different
local and international matters. It
also
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helps
to stay in touch with the near and dear
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people
all the time. More
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Ideas
to
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talk
about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card
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topic
:
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Topic
:
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Describe
a
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social
networking website/platform you
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use
. 1. The number of Facebook
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users
is on the rise in the UK. This is a
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very
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good
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platform
to
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share
our emotions and feelings. I
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mostly
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use
it to connect with my
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friends
and family. The most
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important
benefit of Facebook is that I can remain in touch with my fellow
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men
. It
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helps
me to
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know
about the latest updates of my family and
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friends
. I
also
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use
the
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platform
to
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share
my feelings and dreams.
Besides
, this is a
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great
way to pass
leisurely
hours.

2. Twitter is a
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great
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social
networking
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website
in the USA. I
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use
it to
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share
my thoughts. It is
highly
beneficial for me. The tweets I
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make
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get
immediate attention from all over the world. This is a speedy medium to
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share
something. The
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website
is helpful for me in
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different
perspectives. I
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use
this
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platform
to inform about the latest updates of technology.

3. In India,
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Shtyle
is a
newly
launched
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social
networking
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website
. I
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use
it to create my
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own
avatar. This is
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great
fun
indeed
. It has a virtual room where someone can create their
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own
avatar. Gaming on the rooms is
highly
thrilling. Using this
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website
, I can
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get
connected with gamers.
Besides
, it
also
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helps
to expand my imagination by creating the avatar of mine.

4. Application of
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social
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platforms
is a bit
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different
in China. Here I
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use
WeChat for
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social
communication. It contains almost all the modern features of present
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social
networking websites.
So
, I
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love
using it. It offers a wide range of benefits to
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users
. It
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helps
to post on the wall, arrange taxi
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service
and
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many
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other
daily activities. I am
greatly
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benefitted
from this app. I
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use
it to
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share
my moments with
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friends
, chat with
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other
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people
and much more.

5. Tumbler is a
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microblogging
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website
. This has occupied a
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great
position in Malaysia. I
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use
the site for several purposes. I am
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mostly
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benefitted
that I can
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make
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some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
notes to
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share
with my network.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
do not need to waste more time on photo selection or
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other
activities. It
also
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allows
the
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users
to follow the
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other
bloggers and
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get
to
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know
about their status. It
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helps
me to express my sudden feelings. In fact, I am not a skilled blogger and
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use
this
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just
to
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share
what I
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think
.

6.
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Linkedin
is a wonderful
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social
networking site. I
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mostly
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use
the site to
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know
about
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jobs
and
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other
purposes. The
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website
is
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mostly
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used
by professionals of
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different
working sectors. They post
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jobs
and offers for others.
Honestly
, I have
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got
my
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current
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job
using this
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website
. I had been seeking a
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job
for me near Sydney and
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got
this one after knowing about it from the
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website
. If you can
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talk
about this cue card
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topic
, you should be able to answer the following
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topics
as
well
:

1.
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Describe
your
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favourite
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website. 2
.
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Describe
a
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website
you
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often
browse.

3.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a useful
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website
you have recently browsed.

4.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
an application of software you
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use
on your mobile phone.

5.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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website
or software you find useful to connect with others.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
127Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe a social networking website/platform you use. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
15 paragraphs
932 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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