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Describe a person you recently met again after a long time. v.1

Describe a person you recently met again after a long time. v. 1
Describe a person you recently met again after a long time. You should say: who the person was where you met him/her why/how you met him/her again and explain if you would like to get to know this person better. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer: Life is like a big journey where we meet all kinds of people at different times and under different circumstances. Sometimes, we remember some of them while we forget about many others. I guess that forgetting about people, who we don’t see often, is just a human nature just like I forgot about the young banker, whom I met a long time ago. But, very recently, I met this young banker again at a local shopping centre when I went there to buy some regular household stuff. Interestingly, it was not me who recognized him first, but rather it was the young banker (not so young anymore though) who called me with my name from behind. I looked back, but initially, I had no clue as to who that person could really be. So, I just kept staring at him until he came forward and introduced me as the young banker who I met about 8 years ago at a bank in another city. Slowly but surely, my memories started to come back to me when he reminded me how I forgot to pick up my bank chequebook and left the city. It was then that I clearly remembered how that young banker fellow at that time called me from his bank and informed me about my lost chequebook. Later on, this kind banker actually took all the pains to mail me my lost chequebook in a courier service. Anyway, after meeting him again at the shopping centre after such a long time, I felt like he deserved a very special thank from me again for his sincere efforts to send me back my bank chequebook. Anyway, after meeting the young banker, I learned a very important lesson which was that we should always remember the good deeds of the people if not the people themselves. I didn’t care to remember the banker, but the banker cared to remember me, which proves that he is a genuinely nice, responsible and caring person. And, if we don’t like to get to know a nice, responsible and caring person, then who we will! ?
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Describe
a
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person
you recently
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met
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again
after a long
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time
. You should say:
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who
the
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person
was where you
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met
him/her why/how you
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met
him/her
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again
and
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explain
if you would like to
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get
to know this
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person
better. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you are going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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Model Answer:

Life is like a
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big
journey where we
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meet
all kinds of
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people
at
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different
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times
and under
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different
circumstances.
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Sometimes
, we
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remember
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some
of them while we forget about
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many
others.
I guess
that forgetting about
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people
,
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who
we don’t
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see
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often
, is
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just
a human nature
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just
like I forgot about the
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young
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banker
, whom I
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met
a long
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time
ago.

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But
,
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very
recently, I
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met
this
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young
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banker
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again
at a local shopping
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centre
when I went there to
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buy
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some
regular household stuff.
Interestingly
, it was not me
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who
recognized him
first
,
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but
rather
it was the
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young
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banker
(not
so
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young
anymore though)
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who
called me with my name from behind. I looked back,
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but
initially
, I had no clue as to
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who
that
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person
could
really
be.
So
, I
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just
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kept
staring at him until he came forward and introduced me as the
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young
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banker
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who
I
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met
about 8 years ago at a
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bank
in another city.

Slowly
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but
surely
, my memories
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started
to
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come
back to me when he reminded me how I forgot to pick up my
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bank
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chequebook
and
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left
the city. It was then that I
clearly
remembered how that
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young
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banker
fellow at that
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time
called me from his
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bank
and informed me about my lost
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chequebook
. Later on, this kind
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banker
actually
took all the pains to mail me my lost
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chequebook
in a courier service.

Anyway
, after meeting him
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again
at the shopping
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centre
after such a long
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time
, I felt like he deserved a
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very
special thank from me
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again
for his sincere efforts to
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send
me back my
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bank
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chequebook
.

Anyway
, after meeting the
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young
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banker
, I learned a
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very
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important
lesson which was that we should always
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remember
the
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good
deeds of the
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people
if not the
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people
themselves. I didn’t care to
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remember
the
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banker
,
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but
the
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banker
cared to
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remember
me, which proves that he is a
genuinely
nice, responsible and caring
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person
. And, if we don’t like to
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get
to know a nice, responsible and caring
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person
, then
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who
we will! ?
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
57Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a person you recently met again after a long time. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
6 paragraphs
433 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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