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Describe a night when you could not sleep at all. v.1

Describe a night when you could not sleep at all. v. 1
Describe a night when you could not sleep at all. You should say: when it happened where you were then why you could not sleep that night and explain how you felt about it. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer 1: To be honest, I can hardly recall a time when I had a problem with sleeping. But, of course, I also have bad days (or should I say “bad nights”) once in a blue moon, when even a person like me has to struggle to fall asleep. Today, I would like to share the story of one such bad night when I couldn’t sleep at all. It happened about 5/6 years ago when I needed to visit a small town in my country in a very remote area to meet a prospective client. The call to visit that client came rather unexpectedly. But, since, the client was willing to offer a lucrative deal to my real estate company, I, as a Sr. Sales Director, had no other option but to leave for the little town the very next day to close the deal. By the way, my company was in the business of constructing markets, manufacturing plants and commercial centres. But, after arriving in that small town at night, I found that there were only a couple of small hotels in that town with no vacancy. But, a manager from one of those hotels offered me a room which was very close to the reception and lobby area. Initially, I became glad about the offer, thinking that I had finally found a place to sleep, only, of course, to find out later at night that there was nothing to be glad, after all. In fact, I couldn’t sleep the whole night because the night auditor (in charge of the night shift) of the hotel kept his TV on the whole night with high volume. Besides, he was also talking with his friends in a very loud voice over the phone the whole night that prevented me from sleeping. Anyway, after spending the night there, I felt that I should have been more careful in choosing a hotel in that small town. Besides, I also felt too tired and cranky to talk to my client that day since I couldn’t sleep the whole night. All in all, it was a horrible experience.       Sample Answer 2: I often go to bed after midnight and a sleepless night is not a rare experience for me. Remaining awake to prepare for an approaching exam is the most common reason I spent many sleepless nights. However, for this cue card topic, I would like to talk about a night I spent at a hospital and could not sleep even for a minute. It was 2016, probably the mid-July, and all of a sudden my grandfather got severely ill. The doctor who came to our house to check my grandfather advised us to take him to the city hospital. We called for an ambulance and took my grandpa to the hospital. My parents, two cousins, my eldest uncle and my youngest aunt were in the hospital that night. They were all very worried and my aunt was sobbing ceaselessly. We were all concerned about the well-being of my grandpa. The doctor told us that it was wise of us to bring the patient to the hospital without any delay as it could have been disastrous otherwise. He also informed us that a panel of doctors who were observing my grandpa's medical history had decided to operate him that night. He also assured us that it was a minor operation and we had nothing to worry about as the best doctor in the town happened to be there that night. In spite of the doctor's assurance, we were very anxious. At around 11. 00 pm the doctor operated my grandpa and he was unconscious. I stayed at the hospital until the next noon and could not sleep at all. Frankly speaking, I did not want to sleep at all and the experience did not bother me. A hospital is not a place where a patient's relatives and family members can sleep. I prayed to the Almighty to help my grandpa get well soon. At around 4. 30 in the morning, a nurse came to us and gave us the good news; my grandpa was conscious at that time and he wanted to see us. That was a great relief and we thanked the nurse who gave us this news. It was a sleepless night but I did not feel dizzy or sleepy at all. My brain must have been busy thinking about the sickness and wellbeing of my grandfather and the expresso coffee also released some of my tiredness. I slept the next day at around 3. 30 pm and my grandfather was out of the danger then. Interestingly I slept almost 14 consecutive hours the next day as I can recall.     Sample Answer 3: Waking up all of a sudden at night or sleeping only for a couple of hours is really irritating experience. But in some cases, people are to pass sleepless nights due to some unavoidable reasons. Last month, I had to pass a sleepless night too because of an important exam the next day. I would like to thank you for the chance to talk about it. I am an undergrad student at Hopkinson's University and my major is History. A couple of months ago I took my third-semester final examination and it was an important exam. Moreover, a course titled 'Ancient history and its impact on the modern era' was a bit difficult for me. In fact, it was one of the toughest courses in the entire semester. I was not prepared well for the subject. Accordingly, I felt the necessity to revise the syllabus the night before the exam. I live in the university dormitory and my other roommates are from my class. Hence, the situation was the same for all of us as we had the same exam the next day. But it was worse for me! Fortunately, my roommates helped me greatly that night by sharing their class notes and idea. If I had been in any other place other than my dormitory, it would have been impossible for me to properly prepare for the course. I did not sleep at all that night and it was not a big issue as I had two other roommates who were also sleepless. My preparation for the exam was not sufficient and that is why I had to take the challenge to utilise the remaining night and prepare for the exam. It is often a trend that many students follow. Though I am not one of them, this time it was different. I spent the night mostly by revising the syllabus and drinking coffee. It was an arduous task for me to complete the syllabus in one night. There were lots of texts and most of them dealt with complex ancient historical events. However, my roommates helped me to a great extent. With their support and with the cost of a sleepless night, I took the exam. The grading is yet to be published but I am hoping for a good grade. This sleepless night was a lesson for me. I had to spend the sleepless night only for my negligence. If I were sincere enough with the course, I could have done better in the test.     More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe a night when you could not sleep at all. 1.   Usually, I do not like to watch horror movies but last weekend, I watched a really scary one and had to pass a sleepless night. I went to visit my maternal uncle in Seattle and met my cousins. They were fond of horror movies and compelled me to watch one. The name of the movie was 'Annabelle' and the impact of watching this movie was disastrous. I could not sleep the whole night. Whenever I closed my eyes, I felt like someone was near me. The experience was not entertaining at all. Literally, I slept when the night was over. 2.   I had to pass a sleepless night a couple of weeks ago when I went to my village in Uttar Pradesh. I went there to meet my parents and other family members. But I did not know that a musical event was arranged in our village on that very night. Some of the local musicians performed in the event, so I had to sacrifice my rest for that night and enjoy the concert to the last minute. 3.   I am unable to stay awake late at night but recently I had to remain awake for the whole night. It was the annual sports competition at my university here in Greece and I was assigned to complete some tasks before the event. But owing to sickness, I could not complete them in due time and had to work hard to complete them before the event day. So, I could not sleep that night. It was an irritating experience for me. 4.   Last September, I passed a sleepless night. In fact, I was at my friend’s place to celebrate a bachelor party. We had a plan that will not sleep at that night and enjoy our time to the fullest. Everything went well and we had tons of fun. The barbeque party was outstanding. But there was no liquor for us and we just drank soft beverages during the party. I felt glad indeed. Actually, it was a great gathering for us and we felt like as if we went back to our childhood days. 5.   I never prefer to pass sleepless night but this time I had to change my decision. I was in the middle of a cabin on a train. It was an official journey to the northwest part of Germany. I had another partner with whom I played cards for the rest of the night. In fact, I do not sleep well at an unknown place and it was out of the question that I would sleep in a fast pacing train. It was an interesting journey and thanks to the friend who did not sleep to play cards with me.   If you know how to answer this cue card topic, you should be able to answer the following topics as well: 1. Describe something unusual you have done recently. 2. Describe a time when you were worried. 3. Describe a time when someone accompanied you. 4. Talk about a sleepless night you have spent. 5. Describe a night you did not want to sleep.
Describe
a
night
when you could not
sleep
at all. You should say: when it happened where you were then why you could not
sleep
that
night
and
explain
how you
felt
about it. [You will
have to
talk
about the
topic
for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
think
about what you are going to say. You can
make
some
notes to
help
you if you wish.
]
 
Model
Answer
1:

To be honest, I can hardly recall a
time
when I had a problem with sleeping.
But
, of
course
, I
also
have
bad
days (or should I say “
bad
nights”)
once in a blue moon, when even a person like me
has to
struggle to fall asleep.
Today
, I would like to share the story of one such
bad
night
when I couldn’t
sleep
at all.

It happened about 5/6 years ago when I needed to visit a
small
town
in my country in a
very
remote area to
meet
a prospective
client
. The call to visit that
client
came
rather
unexpectedly
.
But
, since, the
client
was willing to offer a lucrative deal to my real estate
company
, I, as a Sr. Sales Director, had no
other
option
but
to
leave
for the
little
town
the
very
next
day to close the deal.

By the way, my
company
was in the business of constructing markets, manufacturing plants and commercial
centres
.
But
, after arriving in that
small
town
at
night
, I found that there were
only
a
couple
of
small
hotels
in that
town
with no vacancy.
But
, a manager from one of those
hotels
offered me a room which was
very
close to the reception and lobby area.

Initially
, I became glad about the offer, thinking that I had
finally
found a
place
to
sleep
,
only
, of
course
, to find out later at
night
that there was nothing to be glad,
after all
. In
fact
, I couldn’t
sleep
the
whole
night
because
the
night
auditor (in charge of the
night
shift) of the
hotel
kept
his TV on the
whole
night
with high volume.
Besides
, he was
also
talking with his friends in a
very
loud voice over the phone the
whole
night
that
prevented
me from sleeping.

Anyway
, after spending the
night
there, I
felt
that I should have been more careful in choosing a
hotel
in that
small
town
.
Besides
, I
also
felt
too tired and cranky to
talk
to my
client
that day since I couldn’t
sleep
the
whole
night
. All in all, it was a horrible
experience
.
     
Sample
Answer
2:

I
often
go to bed after midnight and a
sleepless
night
is not a rare
experience
for me. Remaining awake to prepare for an approaching exam is the most common reason I
spent
many
sleepless
nights
.
However
, for this cue
card
topic
, I would like to
talk
about a
night
I
spent
at a
hospital
and could not
sleep
even for a minute.

It was 2016,
probably
the mid-July, and all of a sudden my
grandfather
got
severely
ill. The
doctor
who
came to our
house
to
check
my
grandfather
advised us to take him to the city
hospital
. We called for an ambulance and took my
grandpa
to the
hospital
. My parents, two cousins, my eldest uncle and my youngest aunt were in the
hospital
that
night
. They were all
very
worried and my aunt was sobbing
ceaselessly
. We were all concerned about the
well
-being of my
grandpa
. The
doctor
told
us that it was wise of us to bring the patient to the
hospital
without any delay as it could have been disastrous
otherwise
. He
also
informed us that a panel of
doctors
who
were observing my grandpa's medical history had decided to operate him that
night
. He
also
assured us that it was a minor
operation and
we had nothing to worry about as the best
doctor
in the
town
happened to be there that
night
.
In spite of
the doctor's assurance, we were
very
anxious.

At around 11. 00 pm the
doctor
operated my
grandpa and
he was unconscious. I stayed at the
hospital
until the
next
noon and could not
sleep
at all.

Frankly
speaking, I did not want to
sleep
at all and the
experience
did not bother me. A
hospital
is not a
place
where a patient's relatives and family members can
sleep
. I prayed to the Almighty to
help
my
grandpa
get
well
soon
. At around 4. 30 in the morning, a nurse came to us and gave us the
good
news; my
grandpa
was conscious at that
time and
he wanted to
see
us. That was a great
relief and
we thanked the nurse
who
gave us this news.

It was a
sleepless
night
but
I did not feel dizzy or sleepy at all. My brain
must
have been busy thinking about the sickness and
wellbeing
of my
grandfather
and the
expresso
coffee
also
released
some
of my tiredness. I slept the
next
day at around 3. 30 pm and my
grandfather
was out of the
danger
then.
Interestingly
I slept almost 14 consecutive hours the
next
day as I can recall.
   
Sample
Answer
3:

Waking up all of a sudden at
night
or sleeping
only
for a
couple
of hours is
really
irritating
experience
.
But
in
some
cases,
people
are to pass
sleepless
nights
due to
some
unavoidable reasons. Last month, I had to pass a
sleepless
night
too
because
of an
important
exam the
next
day. I would like to thank you for the chance to
talk
about it.

I am an undergrad student at
Hopkinson
's University and my major is History. A
couple
of months ago I took my third-semester final examination and it was an
important
exam.
Moreover
, a
course
titled 'Ancient history and its impact on the modern era' was a bit difficult for me. In
fact
, it was one of the toughest
courses
in the entire semester. I was not prepared
well
for the subject.
Accordingly
, I
felt
the necessity to revise the syllabus the
night
before
the exam.

I
live
in the university dormitory and my
other
roommates
are from my
class
.
Hence
, the situation was the same for all of us as we had the same exam the
next
day.
But
it was worse for me!
Fortunately
, my
roommates
helped
me
greatly
that
night
by sharing their
class
notes and
idea
. If I had been in any
other
place
other
than my dormitory, it would have been impossible for me to
properly
prepare for the
course
. I did not
sleep
at all that
night
and it was not a
big
issue as I had two
other
roommates
who
were
also
sleepless.

My preparation for the exam was not sufficient and
that is
why I had to take the challenge to
utilise
the remaining
night
and prepare for the exam. It is
often
a trend that
many
students follow. Though I am not one of them, this
time
it was
different
. I
spent
the
night
mostly
by revising the syllabus and drinking coffee.

It was an arduous task for me to
complete
the syllabus in one
night
. There were lots of texts and most of them dealt with complex ancient historical
events
.
However
, my
roommates
helped
me to a great extent. With their support and with the cost of a
sleepless
night
, I took the exam. The grading is
yet
to
be published
but
I am hoping for a
good
grade.

This
sleepless
night
was a lesson for me. I had to spend the
sleepless
night
only
for my negligence. If I were sincere
enough
with the
course
, I could have done better in the
test
.
   
More
Ideas
to
talk
about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task
Card
topic
:
Topic
:
Describe
a
night
when you could not
sleep
at all. 1.
 
Usually
, I do not like to
watch
horror
movies
but
last weekend, I
watched
a
really scary
one and had to pass a
sleepless
night
. I
went
to visit my maternal uncle in Seattle and met my cousins. They were fond of horror
movies
and compelled me to
watch
one. The name of the
movie
was 'Annabelle' and the impact of watching this
movie
was disastrous. I could not
sleep
the
whole
night
. Whenever I closed my eyes, I
felt
like someone was near me. The
experience
was not entertaining at all.
Literally
, I slept when the
night
was over.

2.
 
I had to pass a
sleepless
night
a
couple
of weeks ago when I
went
to my village in Uttar Pradesh. I
went
there to
meet
my parents and
other
family members.
But
I did not know that a musical
event
was arranged
in our village on that
very
night
.
Some of the
local musicians performed in the
event
,
so
I had to sacrifice my rest for that
night
and enjoy the concert to the last minute.

3.
 
I am unable to stay awake late at
night
but
recently I had to remain awake for the
whole
night
. It was the annual sports competition at my university here in
Greece and
I
was assigned
to
complete
some
tasks
before
the
event
.
But
owing to sickness, I could not
complete
them in due
time
and had to work
hard
to
complete
them
before
the
event
day.
So
, I could not
sleep
that
night
. It was an irritating
experience
for me.

4.
 
Last September, I passed a
sleepless
night
. In
fact
, I was at my friend’s
place
to celebrate a bachelor party. We had a plan that will not
sleep
at that
night
and enjoy our
time
to the fullest. Everything
went
well
and we had tons of fun. The
barbeque
party was outstanding.
But
there was no liquor for
us and
we
just
drank soft beverages during the party. I
felt
glad
indeed
.
Actually
, it was a great gathering for
us and
we
felt
like as if we
went
back to our childhood days.

5.
 
I never prefer to pass
sleepless
night
but
this
time
I had to
change
my decision. I was in the middle of a cabin on a train. It was an official journey to the northwest part of Germany. I had another partner with whom I played
cards
for the rest of the
night
. In
fact
, I do not
sleep
well
at an unknown
place
and it was out of the question that I would
sleep
in a
fast
pacing train. It was an interesting journey and thanks to the friend
who
did not
sleep
to play
cards
with me.
 
If
you know
how to
answer
this cue
card
topic
, you should be able to
answer
the following
topics
as
well: 1
.
Describe
something unusual you have done recently.

2.
Describe
a
time
when you
were worried
.

3.
Describe
a
time
when someone accompanied you.

4.
Talk
about a
sleepless
night
you have
spent. 5
.
Describe
a
night
you did not want to
sleep
.
31Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
245Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
28Mistakes

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