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Describe a happy experience from your childhood that you remember. v.1

Describe a happy experience from your childhood that you remember. v. 1
Describe a happy experience from your childhood that you remember. You should say: what it is how old you were then what exactly happened and explain how you feel about it now. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer: One of the sweetest memories of my childhood was the first time I learned to ride a bicycle and I was tremendously glad to have the experience. My elder brother helped me ride a bicycle and he was very careful about it. Honestly, without his help, I would not have learned it. This candidate task card looks very interesting and I will explain the event now. I would also like to thank you to let me the opportunity to talk about it. I was about six or seven, I cannot exactly remember the age. But it was not the age for a girl to learn to ride a bicycle. I just crossed my elementary grades when I learned to ride a bicycle. My older brother shared everything with me and I was his passenger on the newly received bicycle from his birthday. He was a teen but rode on bicycles like an adult. After riding for a couple of days behind my brother, I wanted to learn to ride it myself. My brother, Jim, did not hesitate to teach me the riding. Initially, he explained how bicycle worked and took me to take the rider seat. I fell on the ground several times and Jim instructed me to keep the balance. In the first phase, Jim used to control the bicycle from behind so that I do not fall on the ground and gradually I improved in riding the bicycle. Later, Jim allowed me to ride the bicycle alone. It was a nice experience to me. I know how to ride a bicycle and even I can drive a car now. Jim is my instructor in this case too. In fact, as an older brother, Jim cared for me too much and helped me greatly in learning the riding and driving. So, I am grateful to him. If he would not take the initiatives in my childhood, I would not have become a driver in a true sense. More Ideas to help you prepare your own answer: Cue Card Topic: Describe a happy experience from your childhood that you remember. 1. I got admitted to an elementary school in Montreal, Canada when I was barely 5 years old. In the first day of the school, I met with some of other students and made a life-long friendship with them. I met Harry, Johanna, Julia, Robert, Alfred, and Jim. I feel lucky for having such people in my life. They are my best friends now and the bondage is stronger than ever. 2. My fifth birthday was the happiest event in my life. I was five years old and my parents wanted to celebrate my birthday. All the relatives were invited to the house – located in the southeast corner of Chennai, India. I was overwhelmed with the presents I received on that day. Everyone brought some sort of toys and clothing for me. I was happy with those and started playing with the toys immediately. 3. I went to visit a sea beach in Thailand with my parents. I was five or six years old – I cannot remember the exact age. It was a family trip and this was the first time I went out of my own country, Indonesia. My parents wanted to take me out of the country to let me see the world. I really feel good now about the experience. In fact, that was the very first trip out of my country and I was unable to make any other trips so far. So, often I check the pictures in Thailand. 4. My cousins arranged for a mini golf in their courtyard in Hamilton. I was only eight years old when I took part in the game. They were unwilling to take me with them. They thought that I would not be able to play the game. But I made an outstanding score. Later, they all appreciated me and asked how I played so well. In fact, I was a quick learner and learned to play just seeing them. 5. Visiting a local water park was the most memorable experience in my childhood. I went to a park located in Chicago and had lots of fun. I was nine then. I did not have an idea that water amusement could be so interesting. My parents also took part in some other activities. It was a nice entertainment for all of us. I felt really glad and enjoyed the water rides very much.
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Describe
a happy
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experience
from your childhood that you
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remember
. You should say: what it is how
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old
you were then what exactly happened and
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explain
how you feel about it
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now
. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you're going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
Sample Answer:

One of the sweetest memories of my childhood was the
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first
time I
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learned
to
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ride
a
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bicycle and
I was
tremendously
glad to have the
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experience
. My elder
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brother
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helped
me
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ride
a
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bicycle and
he was
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very
careful about it.
Honestly
, without his
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help
, I would not have
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learned
it. This candidate task card looks
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very
interesting and I will
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explain
the
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event
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now
. I would
also
like to thank you to
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let
me the opportunity to talk about it.

I was about six or seven, I cannot exactly
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remember
the age.
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But
it was not the age for a girl to learn to
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ride
a
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bicycle
. I
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just
crossed my elementary grades when I
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learned
to
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ride
a
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bicycle
. My older
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brother
shared everything with
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
me and
I was his passenger on the
newly
received
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bicycle
from his birthday. He was a teen
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but
rode on
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bicycles
like an adult.

After
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riding
for a couple of days behind my
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brother
, I wanted to learn to
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ride
it myself. My
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brother
, Jim, did not hesitate to teach me the
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riding
.
Initially
, he
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explained
how
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bicycle
worked and took me to take the rider seat. I fell on the ground several times and Jim instructed me to
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keep
the balance. In the
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first
phase, Jim
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used
to control the
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bicycle
from behind
so
that I do not fall on the ground and
gradually
I
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improved
in
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riding
the
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bicycle
. Later, Jim
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allowed
me to
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ride
the
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bicycle
alone.

It was a nice
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experience
to me. I know how to
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ride
a
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bicycle
and even I can drive a car
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now
. Jim is my instructor
in this case
too. In fact, as an older
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brother
, Jim cared for me too much and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
me
greatly
in learning the
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riding
and driving.
So
, I am grateful to him. If he would not take the initiatives in my childhood, I would not have become a driver in a true sense. More
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Ideas
to
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help
you prepare your
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own
answer: Cue Card Topic:
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Describe
a happy
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experience
from your childhood that you
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remember
. 1. I
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got
admitted to an elementary school in Montreal, Canada when I was
barely
5 years
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old
. In the
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first
day of the school, I met with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of other students and made a life-long friendship with them. I met Harry, Johanna, Julia, Robert, Alfred, and Jim. I feel lucky for having such
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in my life. They are my best friends
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now
and the bondage is stronger than ever.

2. My fifth birthday was the happiest
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event
in my life. I was five years
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old
and my
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parents
wanted to celebrate my birthday. All the relatives
were invited
to the
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house
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
–
located in the southeast corner of Chennai, India. I
was overwhelmed
with the presents I received on that day. Everyone brought
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
sort of toys and clothing for me. I was happy with those and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
playing with the toys immediately.

3. I went to visit a sea beach in Thailand with my
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parents
.
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I
was five or six years
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old
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–
I cannot
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remember
the exact age. It was a family trip and this was the
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first
time I went out of my
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own
country, Indonesia. My
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parents
wanted to take me out of the country to
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let
me
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see
the world. I
really
feel
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good
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now
about the
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experience
. In fact, that was the
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very
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first
trip out of my
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country and
I was unable to
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make
any other trips
so
far.
So
,
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often
I
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check
the pictures in Thailand.

4. My cousins arranged for a mini golf in their courtyard in Hamilton. I was
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only
eight years
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old
when I
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took part
in the game. They were unwilling to take me with them. They
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thought
that I would not be able to play the game.
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But
I made an outstanding score. Later, they all appreciated me and asked how I played
so
well
. In fact, I was a quick learner and
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learned
to play
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just
seeing them.

5. Visiting a local water park was the most memorable
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experience
in my childhood. I went to a park located in Chicago and had lots of fun. I was nine then.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
did not have an
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idea
that water amusement could be
so
interesting. My
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parents
also
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took part
in
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some
other activities. It was a nice entertainment for all of us. I felt
really
glad and enjoyed the water
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rides
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very
much.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
61Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a happy experience from your childhood that you remember. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
9 paragraphs
818 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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