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Describe a company which employs many employees in your hometown. v.1

Describe a company which employs many employees in your hometown. v. 1
Describe a company which employs many employees in your hometown. You should say: what type of company it is how many people work there what type of qualification they require and explain whether you would be interested to work there or not. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer: Thank you for this opportunity to let me talk about a company in my hometown that employs a sizeable number of people from the locality. This is a chair manufacturing company and it has been manufacturing chairs for a long time in Greece. The company employs a good number of local people from the city to manufacture various types of chairs and other accessories to decorate chairs and tables in my hometown. This is a smart cue card topic and I am really happy to have this. Around 900 people work here and most of them are workers. In fact, the job of manufacturing chair involves a huge number of hands to complete the process. Almost all the people of this locality are involved in producing chairs and they work around the day in the company factory. The majority of the people belong to the working class while some of them are working as high officials in the company. Actually, the area I live in is densely populated and most of the people are not that much educated. As a result, they are unable to manage a higher job for them. A high school graduation is a must to get a job with this company and with a higher education, anyone can apply for some other positions than that of the worker. But if someone can show some extraordinary skills, educational barriers are relaxed for them. The authority employs them without a second thought and considers them as the asset for the company. The salary offered by this company is also higher and everyone working here is pleased. I would be interested to work here if I get a chance. Actually, all the works are equal and contribute to building the society. So, I do consider the job of a chair company worker is respectable. Moreover, the benefits of this company are also attractive and everyone loves their job here. I am currently doing my bachelor degree in Business Administration and would love to get a relevant administrative job in this company. More Ideas to help you prepare your own answer: Cue Card Topic: Describe a company which employs many employees in your hometown. 1. This is a renowned car manufacturing company based in Nuremberg in Germany. The company employs a good number of employees and at present- around 150 employees work there. The employees need to be moderately educated. They need the minimum qualification for getting recruited. If I get the scope of working with the company, certainly I will work there. The packages are highly lucrative for the employees. 2. T-mobile is a large mobile phone device manufacturer based in New York. This is a large company and employs around 300 people in its plant. All the staffs need to be highly educated as they deal with sophisticated mobile accessories, equipment and technologies. I am unwilling to get a job there for some reasons. The most important thing is that the work in the factory is complicated. The staffs inside the factory need to work with sophisticated tools to make or repair the mobile phones. And I am unable to do those. 3. National Australia Bank is a bank in Australia. It employs a notable number of people in its branches across the country. Now over 500 people are working there. Getting a job in this bank requires a higher degree. Completing the university degree is the minimum qualification for a job in this bank. Certainly, I am interested to get a job in this bank. The jobs are filled with responsibilities and rewards are outstanding. 4. Singtel is communication company based in Singapore. This is one of the largest telecommunication company in the Asian region. The company employs a substantial number of personnel to run its daily activities. A bachelor degree is a must to get a job here. I would like to serve here if I can have the chance. The company has a wide pool of responsibilities and I have the option to get one after my qualification. 5. In Russia, Inter RAO is a power engineering company. This is one of the largest companies in the country and employs over thousands of people. The company is based in Moscow and has its branches across the country. An engineering degree is a must to get a job in this company. The rewards for the employees here also smart. Despite my interest to get a job here, I would not be allowed because I do not have the degree needed to get a job here.
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employees
in your
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hometown
. You should say: what type of
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company
it is how
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many
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people
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work
there what type of
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qualification
they require and
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explain
whether you would
be interested
to
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work
there or not. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you're going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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you if you wish.
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Sample Answer:

Thank you for this opportunity to
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let
me talk about a
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company
in my
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hometown
that
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employs
a sizeable
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number
of
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people
from the locality. This is a
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chair
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manufacturing
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company
and it has been
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manufacturing
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chairs
for a long time in Greece. The
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company
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employs
a
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good
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number
of local
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people
from the city to manufacture various types of
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chairs
and other accessories to decorate
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chairs
and tables in my
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hometown
. This is a smart cue card
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topic and
I am
really
happy to have this.

Around 900
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people
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work
here and most of them are workers. In fact, the
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job
of
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manufacturing
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chair
involves a huge
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number
of hands to complete the process. Almost all the
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people
of this locality
are involved
in producing
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chairs and
they
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work
around the day in the
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company
factory. The majority of the
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people
belong to the
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working
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class
while
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some
of them are
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working
as high officials in the
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company
.
Actually
, the area I
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live
in is
densely
populated and most of the
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people
are not that much educated.
As a result
, they are unable to manage a higher
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job
for them.

A high school graduation is a
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must to
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get
a
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job
with this
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company
and with a higher education, anyone can apply for
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some
other positions than that of the worker.
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if someone can
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show
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some
extraordinary
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skills
, educational barriers
are relaxed
for them. The authority
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employs
them without a second
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thought
and considers them as the asset for the
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company
. The salary offered by this
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company
is
also
higher and everyone
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working
here is
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pleased
.

I would
be interested
to
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work
here if I
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get
a chance.
Actually
, all the works are equal and contribute to building the society.
So
, I do consider the
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job
of a
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chair
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company
worker is respectable.
Moreover
, the benefits of this
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company
are
also
attractive and everyone
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loves
their
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job
here. I am
currently
doing my bachelor
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degree
in Business Administration and would
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love
to
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get
a relevant administrative
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job
in this
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company
. More
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Ideas
to
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help
you prepare your
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own
answer: Cue Card Topic:
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Describe
a
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company
which
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employs
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many
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employees
in your
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hometown
. 1. This is a renowned car
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manufacturing
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company
based in Nuremberg in Germany. The
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company
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employs
a
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good
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number
of
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employees
and at present- around 150
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employees
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work
there. The
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employees
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need
to be
moderately
educated. They
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need
the minimum
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qualification
for getting recruited. If I
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get
the scope of
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working
with the
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company
,
certainly
I will
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work
there. The packages are
highly
lucrative for the
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employees. 2
. T-mobile is a large mobile phone device manufacturer based in New York. This is a large
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company
and
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employs
around 300
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people
in its plant. All the staffs
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need
to be
highly
educated as they deal with sophisticated mobile accessories, equipment and technologies. I am unwilling to
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get
a
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job
there for
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some
reasons. The most
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important
thing is that the
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work
in the factory
is complicated
. The staffs inside the factory
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need
to
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work
with sophisticated tools to
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make
or repair the mobile phones. And I am unable to do those.

3. National Australia
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Bank
is a
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bank
in Australia. It
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employs
a notable
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number
of
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people
in its branches across the country.
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Now
over 500
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people
are
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working
there. Getting a
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job
in this
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bank
requires a higher
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degree
. Completing the university
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degree
is the minimum
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qualification
for a
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job
in this
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bank
.
Certainly
, I
am interested
to
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get
a
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job
in this
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bank
. The
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jobs
are filled
with responsibilities and rewards are outstanding.

4.
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Singtel
is communication
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company
based in Singapore. This is one of the largest telecommunication
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company
in the Asian region. The
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company
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employs
a substantial
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number
of personnel to run its daily activities. A bachelor
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degree
is a
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must to
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get
a
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job
here. I would like to serve here if I can have the chance. The
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company
has a wide pool of responsibilities and I have the option to
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get
one after my
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qualification. 5
. In Russia, Inter
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RAO
is a power engineering
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company
. This is one of the largest
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companies
in the country and
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employs
over thousands of
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people
. The
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company
is based
in Moscow and has its branches across the country. An engineering
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degree
is a
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must to
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get
a
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job
in this
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company
. The rewards for the
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employees
here
also
smart. Despite my interest to
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get
a
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job
here, I would not be
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allowed
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because
I do not have the
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degree
needed to
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get
a
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job
here.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
123Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe a company which employs many employees in your hometown. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
9 paragraphs
840 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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