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Describe a garden or a public place you remember visiting. v.1

Describe a garden or a public place you remember visiting. v. 1
Describe a garden or a public place you remember visiting. You should say: where it is what it looks like what people do there and explain why you remember this particular garden or public place.   Model Answer 1: I live in one of the crowded cities in the world where life can become really hectic. Thankfully, there are some public gardens also in this crowded city which allows people to take some fresh breath of air. Today, I would like to talk about one such garden in my city which I remember visiting. It is actually called Dhaka Botanical Garden which is located in one part of the capital city of Bangladesh and also adjacent to Dhaka Zoo. This National Botanic Garden of Bangladesh and the Bangladesh National Herbarium make up the largest plant conservation centre in Bangladesh, with an area of around 84 hectares (210 acres). The garden provides learning and recreational facilities. It is divided into 57 sections and is managed by the Forest Department under the Ministry of Environment and Forests, Government of Bangladesh.   There are millions of plants which are eye-soothing. It is one of the largest botanical gardens of Bangladesh, and a nature learning centre for the nature lovers, bird watchers, photographers and botanists and a tourist destination. The Garden has a scientific collection of approximately 100, 000 preserved specimens of plants. People can actually do pretty much everything at this place, including relaxing at a restaurant, walking in its wide space freely, renting a boat, watching beautiful lotus flowers in ponds in addition to watching water plants and birds from the observation decks.   In fact, thousands of people visit this place in the morning, without paying any fees, in order to do jogging while families also bring their children to enjoy the beautiful nature. Anyway, I remember visiting this beautiful garden because I have seen the most beautiful flowers there, with trees as old as 500 years, as well as some really stunningly beautiful landscaping. In fact, once I visited the place, I felt like I was lost in nature for a while roaming around it, and walking on its smooth roads while playing hide and seek with the shadows of the long trees on them. In fact, it helped me relax my mind by forgetting about all the worldly worries for a while.   Sample Answer 2: I remember visiting a big garden at my uncle’s house when I was a college student. The garden was so big and was so beautiful that I still remember it. It was at my maternal uncle’s farmhouse and was adjacent to a narrow lake. My uncle lives in a 4 storied building but he had a firm house and a very nice garden that he looked after. This was a very good earning source for him as well. One day he invited me to visit the garden with him and I agreed to visit it. I became speechless when I entered into the garden. It was at least 2-3 acres and had been placed beside a lake. A soft, balmy wind was blowing and the flowers were dancing with the wind. I have never seen so many flowers together that I watched in this garden. There were fences all around the garden to protect it from savage animals. There were several types of trees in this garden including flowers trees, vegetable & fruit trees and big trees to give shadows to other trees. This was not a public garden so the entry was restricted for the people to enter the garden. But I have noticed that people could easily come near the garden as the lake was a public place. They enjoyed the beauty of the garden from outside. The people who take care of the garden water the trees, cut off the unexpected branches of the trees, takes away the dust and rubbish and keep a close eye in the garden so that, wild animals cannot cause any harm. I remember the garden because it was so beautiful and was near the lake. The several numbers of flowers in the garden and the chattering of the known and unknown birds overwhelmed me. I was supposed to be there for an hour or so but I was so much attracted to the beauty of this garden that I stay there for several hours.   Similar Cue Card topics: Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as well: Describe a garden you visited in your childhood. Describe a garden you know about. Describe a beautiful garden you have visited. Describe a beautiful place you have visited recently.
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garden
or a
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public
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place
you
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remember
visiting. You should say: where it is what it looks like what
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people
do there and
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explain
why you
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remember
this particular
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garden
or
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public
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place
.
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Model Answer 1: I
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live
in one of the crowded
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cities
in the world where life can become
really
hectic.
Thankfully
, there are
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some
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public
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gardens
also
in this crowded city which
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allows
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people
to take
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some
fresh breath of air.
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Today
, I would like to talk about one such
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garden
in my city which I
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remember
visiting.

It is
actually
called Dhaka Botanical
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Garden
which
is located
in one part of the capital city of Bangladesh and
also
adjacent to Dhaka Zoo. This National Botanic
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Garden
of Bangladesh and the Bangladesh National
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Herbarium
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make
up the largest plant conservation
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centre
in Bangladesh, with an area of around 84 hectares (210 acres).

The
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garden
provides learning and recreational facilities. It
is divided
into 57 sections and
is managed
by the Forest Department under the Ministry of Environment and Forests,
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Government
of Bangladesh.
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There are millions of plants which are eye-soothing. It is one of the largest botanical
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gardens
of Bangladesh, and a nature learning
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centre
for the nature lovers, bird watchers, photographers and botanists and a tourist destination. The
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Garden
has a scientific collection of approximately 100, 000 preserved specimens of plants.

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People
can
actually
do pretty much everything at this
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place
, including relaxing at a restaurant, walking in its wide space
freely
, renting a boat, watching
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beautiful
lotus
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flowers
in ponds
in addition
to watching water plants and birds from the observation decks.
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In fact, thousands of
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people
visit this
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place
in the morning, without paying any fees, in order to do jogging while families
also
bring their children to enjoy the
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beautiful
nature.

Anyway
, I
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remember
visiting this
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beautiful
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garden
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because
I have
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seen
the most
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beautiful
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flowers
there, with
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trees
as
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old
as 500 years, as
well
as
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some
really
stunningly
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beautiful
landscaping. In fact, once I
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visited
the
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place
, I felt like I
was lost
in nature for a while roaming around it, and walking on its smooth roads while playing
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hide and seek
with the shadows of the long
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trees
on them. In fact, it
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helped
me relax my mind by forgetting about all the worldly worries for a while.
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Sample Answer 2: I
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remember
visiting a
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big
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garden
at my uncle’s
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house
when I was a college student. The
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garden
was
so
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big
and was
so
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beautiful
that I
still
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remember
it. It was at my maternal uncle’s farmhouse and was adjacent to a narrow
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lake
. My uncle
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lives
in a 4 storied building
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but
he had a firm
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house
and a
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very
nice
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garden
that he looked after. This was a
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very
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good
earning source for him as
well
. One day he invited me to visit the
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garden
with him and I
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agreed
to visit it. I became speechless when I entered into the
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garden
. It was at least 2-3 acres and had
been placed
beside a
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lake
. A soft, balmy wind was blowing and the
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flowers
were dancing with the wind. I have never
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seen
so
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many
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flowers
together that I
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watched
in this
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garden
. There were fences all around the
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garden
to protect it from savage animals. There were several types of
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trees
in this
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garden
including
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flowers
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trees
, vegetable
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&amp
; fruit
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trees
and
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big
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trees
to give shadows to other
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trees
. This was not a
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public
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garden
so
the entry
was restricted
for the
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people
to enter the
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garden
.
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But
I have noticed that
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people
could
easily
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come
near the
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garden
as the
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lake
was a
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public
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place
. They enjoyed the beauty of the
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garden
from outside. The
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people
who take care of the
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garden
water the
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trees
,
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cut
off the unexpected branches of the
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trees
, takes away the dust and rubbish and
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keep
a close eye in the
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garden
so
that, wild animals cannot cause any harm. I
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remember
the
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garden
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because
it was
so
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beautiful
and was near the
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lake
. The several numbers of
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flowers
in the
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garden
and the chattering of the known and unknown birds overwhelmed me. I
was supposed
to be there for an hour or
so
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but
I was
so
much attracted to the beauty of this
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garden
that I stay there for several hours.
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Similar Cue Card topics: Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as
well
:
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Describe
a
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garden
you
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visited
in your childhood.
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Describe
a
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garden
you know
about.
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Describe
a
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beautiful
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garden
you have
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visited
.
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Describe
a
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beautiful
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place
you have
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visited
recently.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
93Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a garden or a public place you remember visiting. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
5 paragraphs
786 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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