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The woman s place is in the home Do you agree or disagree

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The border between male and female has become increasingly blurred in recent years. Yet there still exists a considerable amount of people that believe a woman’s place is exclusively in the house. This point of view is that all women should be forced to be in home, not go out to work or have careers, and they should busy and content themselves with tiding up and decorating the home. On top of this, they must do the cooking and washing. If this is what the point of view says, then I disagree with it. First of all, it is an indisputable fact that nowadays, there are many women who have high. . .
The border between male and female has become
increasingly
blurred in recent years.
Yet
there
still
exists a considerable amount of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
that believe a woman’s place is exclusively in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. This point of view is that all women should
be forced
to be in home, not go out to work or have careers, and they should busy and content themselves with tiding up and decorating the home. On top of this, they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
do the cooking and washing. If this is what the point of view says, then I disagree with it.

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First of all
, it is an indisputable fact that nowadays, there are
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many
women who have high.
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.
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IELTS essay The woman s place is in the home Do you agree or disagree

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
113 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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