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Some people believe that visithe host country should wel differences? What is r view?

Some people believe that visithe host country should wel differences? What is r view? e585V
There has been a dramatic increase in tourism to foreign countries annually in recent years due to the fact that traveling abroad has become far easier calthat visitors to other nations should obey local customs and behaviors for the sake of preserving their own cultures. Overall, it is my personal view that the host country should welcome cultural differences for the following reasons. First of all, some people argue that the arrival of foreign cultures may lead to the loss of local customs, but they fail to see the benefits of cultural diversity. The mixture of many customs will make lif. . .
There has been a dramatic increase in tourism to foreign countries
annually
in recent years due to the fact that traveling abroad has become far easier
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visitors to other nations should obey local customs and behaviors for the sake of preserving their
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own
cultures.
Overall
, it is my personal view that the host country should welcome cultural differences for the following reasons.

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First of all
,
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some
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people
argue that the arrival of foreign cultures may lead to the loss of local customs,
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but
they fail to
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see
the benefits of cultural diversity. The mixture of
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many
customs will
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make
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lif
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IELTS essay Some people believe that visithe host country should wel differences? What is r view?

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