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Students obtain academic information from internet, printer books, articles, teacher discussion, as well

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The importance of different source of information, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence from various source of information has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on people over the year. It can be said that the advent of the internet has changed the way as people used to get information from teacher. This essay will elaborate how internet is more reliable than the other component of getting information and how teacher’s role cannot be ignored thus lead to a logical conclusion. At the outset, there are numerous reasons why internet has become essential part of every aspect of life because it provides a wide range of information, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that today information is available with a single click of every topic, which reduces students precious time and gives more opportunities to expand their own horizon. For example, distance learning not only get information from their own country, but also, they can study all over the world, which develops their understanding of various aspects of life. Hence, information can easily accessible worldwide. Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that teacher also equally contributes in students’ academic career with the help of motivation and interaction in the class. As there are numerable reasons for that but the most salient one is that teacher can be a good friend to lead their academic career into next stage, which helps them to grow in future career. For instance, University of Adelaide approved that teacher played important role in student life especially for international students.
The importance of
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different
source of
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information
, which was always debatable, has
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now
become more

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controversial
. The substantial influence from various source of
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information
has sparked the
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controversy


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over
the potential impact of this trend on
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people
over the year. It can
be said
that the advent of
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the


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internet
has
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changed
the way as
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people
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used
to
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get
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information
from
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teacher
. This essay will
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elaborate


how internet is more reliable than the other component of getting
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information
and how
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teacher’s
role

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cannot
be
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ignored
thus
lead to a logical conclusion.

At the outset, there are numerous reasons why internet has become essential part of every aspect of

life
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because
it provides a wide range of
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information
,
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but
the most conspicuous one stems from the fact

that
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today
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information
is available with a single click of every topic, which
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reduces
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students
precious

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time
and gives more opportunities to expand their
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own
horizon.
For example
, distance learning not
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only


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get
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information
from their
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own
country,
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but
also
, they can study all over the world, which develops their

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understanding
of various aspects of life.
Hence
,
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information
can
easily
accessible worldwide.

Nevertheless
,
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some
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people
adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that
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teacher
also
equally


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contributes
in
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students’
academic career with the
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help
of motivation and interaction in the
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class
. As

there are numerable reasons for that
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but
the most salient one is that
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teacher
can be a
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good
friend to

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lead
their academic career into
next
stage, which
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helps
them to grow in future career.
For instance
,

University of Adelaide approved that
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teacher
played
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important
role in
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student
life
especially
for

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international
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students
.
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IELTS essay Students obtain academic information from internet, printer books, articles, teacher discussion, as well

Essay
  American English
18 paragraphs
272 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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