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Some people think that traveling alone is better than travel with someone you know.

It is fact that some people are believ that traveling alone really helpful in learning countries culture and experience. But some of are believe that it is better to travel with someone we know. And the both aspects are explained in the ensuring paragraphs. Travel alone is the best things for the travelling it some people think that. In fastest World plenty of folks want to be alone for some time. So they got habbite to be alone in their lives. That's why they prefer traveling alone. Firstly there are many advantages of alone traveling like no one can distrub you while enjoying the moment and no one can borrow your time for some other things too. Secondly no body can distru at traveling time and people can learn a lot from the country's culture. And maze can enjoy the moment peacefully. Last but not the least maze can delight if no one distrub while they traveling period. Also people think that the travel with someone it gives a good company on travelling period. Firstly partner can shear Idea and happiness, good vibes. Secondly you can give time to your partner otherwise some people get board at traveling time. It will be delightful to enjoying the trip with someone. These are the benefits. Thus, to conclude the topic it can finally commented that travel with someone is far better than to be alone and has more good effect than the bad effects on travel with someone.
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plenty
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. That's why they prefer traveling
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alone
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at traveling
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and
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can learn a lot from the country's culture. And maze can enjoy the moment
peacefully
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it gives a
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Idea
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board at traveling
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time
. It will be delightful to enjoying the trip with
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someone
. These are the benefits.
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that
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travel
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someone
is far better than to be
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alone
and has more
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effect than the
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IELTS essay Some people think that traveling alone is better than travel with someone you know.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
246 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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