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Some people think that teenage years are the happiest time of most people's lives .other think that adults life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibilities discuss both these views and give your own openion

Some people think that teenage years are the happiest time of most people's lives. other think that adults life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibilities discuss both these views and give your own openion bW2X
Yes ofcourse many people think theenage life gives happiness. As they think it's partially true less stess childish age gives some happiness in order that they couldn't pay any attention of responsibility also called dis intrest it is also called as liberty. Even though thenages are more amanable the could have such dependent other wise it called as lack of knowledge. Secondly in adult age they want to be more veracious or other wise the speak eventual ways though they have more responsibility's in adult age although they committed in the responsibily after getting marrege family children also their parents. With in the circle they have more commitements even though they were more parsimonious. It also called as extreamly very frugle. In my common opening I saw a debate in a channan. and the topic is this is the best life after teenage or adult in that laconic speech the speak very equivocal the algument is extend in half an hour after they concluded a decision theenage life is enjoyable by getting life's from parents but adult age is enjoyable by giving to others so I concluded my essay adult age is more happiest life rather than teenage.
Yes
ofcourse
many
people
think
theenage
life
gives happiness. As they
think
it's
partially
true less
stess
childish
age
gives
some
happiness in order that they couldn't pay any attention of responsibility
also
called dis
intrest
it is
also
called as liberty.
Even though
thenages
are more
amanable
the
could have such dependent
other wise
it called as lack of knowledge.
Secondly
in adult
age
they want to be more veracious or
other wise
the speak
eventual ways though they have more
responsibility's
in adult
age
although they committed in the
responsibily
after getting
marrege
family children
also
their parents. With in the circle they have more
commitements
even though
they were more parsimonious. It
also
called as
extreamly
very
frugle
. In my common opening I
saw
a debate in a
channan
.
and
the topic is this is the best
life
after teenage or adult in that laconic speech
the speak
very
equivocal the
algument
is
extend
in half an hour after they concluded a decision
theenage
life
is enjoyable by getting life's from parents
but
adult
age
is enjoyable by giving to others
so
I concluded my essay adult
age
is
more happiest
life
rather
than teenage.
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IELTS essay Some people think that teenage years are the happiest time of most people's lives. other think that adults life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibilities discuss both these views and give your own openion

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