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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. XGyEO
These days, upward climate change represents a major threat to the entire world as its harsh impacts on human life. Many opine that people had better embrace and no longer comes up against his phenomenon. Personally, I totally disagree with the statement above as I believe that there are a number of useful methods are once carried out could lessen changes in climate. Initially, with an intent to mitigate climate change, the government should strictly regulate people’s environmentally destructed activities. Global warming which originates from exhaust fumes, deforestation, and people’s cognition is one of the most serious causes that provoke unexpected changes in the weather. Governments are expected to impose some fines on people who break the rules and contaminate the environment. Hence, the authorities’ supervision enables people to reduce the number of emissions on a daily basis which leads to the improvement in climate change. The UK, for instance, rarely cope with the natural disaster as they possess many rational policies which significantly control the fluctuations of weather. Furthermore, instead of accepting to suffer from climate variation, people rather formulate a new plan to reduce this situation. Without a doubt, under the strong development in technology aspects, people are supported to expose to the understandings which relate to the climate change and the environment in general. Additionally, in order to effectively gain knowledge, people, especially, youngster are required to join many forums, volunteer works and give the environment a hand to alleviate climate change. In fact, the countries which have high people intellectuality rarely undergo the severe influence of this phenomenon. In conclusion, tackling this severe issue required getting high notice of people from the entire world. In spite of living with climate change, paying attention to find a solution for the mentioned matter will definitely bring better outcomes.
These days, upward
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represents a major threat to the entire world as its harsh impacts on human life.
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opine that
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people
had better embrace and no longer
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comes
up against his phenomenon.
Personally
, I
totally
disagree with the statement above as I believe that there are a number of useful methods are once carried out could lessen
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changes
in climate.

Initially
, with an intent to mitigate
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climate
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change
, the
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government
should
strictly
regulate
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people’s
environmentally
destructed activities. Global warming which originates from exhaust fumes, deforestation, and
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people’s
cognition is one of the most serious causes that provoke unexpected
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changes
in the weather.
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Governments
are
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expected
to impose
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some
fines on
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people
who break the
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rules
and contaminate the environment.
Hence
, the authorities’ supervision enables
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people
to
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reduce
the number of emissions on a daily basis which leads to the improvement in
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climate
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change
. The UK,
for instance
, rarely cope with the natural disaster as they possess
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many
rational policies which
significantly
control the fluctuations of weather.

Furthermore
,
instead
of accepting to suffer from
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climate
variation,
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people
rather
formulate a new plan to
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reduce
this situation. Without a doubt, under the strong development in technology aspects,
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people
are supported
to expose to the understandings which relate to the
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climate
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change
and the environment
in general
.
Additionally
, in order to
effectively
gain knowledge,
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people
,
especially
, youngster
are required
to
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join
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many
forums, volunteer works and give the environment a hand to alleviate
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climate
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change
. In fact, the countries which have high
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people
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intellectuality
rarely undergo the severe influence of this phenomenon.

In conclusion
, tackling this severe issue required getting high notice of
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people
from the entire world.
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In
spite of living with
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climate
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change
, paying attention to find a solution for the mentioned matter will definitely bring better outcomes.
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IELTS essay Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
300 words
6.5
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