Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. jRbXX

Many people claim that customer’ attitude can be highly affected by advertisements to choose and purchase goods; however, it does not appeal and make sense to a majority of individuals because of repetition. Besides, they are focusing on subjects related to the health issues or prices of goods. Most international and famous brands have been using advertising to achieve enormous amount of clients and obviously more financial profit, although it may not work as a great impression on some people who ignore it. For example, many humans do not pay attention to advertisements which are played either between TV programs. Despite this view, I firmly believe that advertising can be effective both mentally and emotionally. For instance, many individuals following everything related to lead a healthy life. So, if a care health product publishes an advertisement which has adequate information about effective and positive consequence on physical well-being, it probably would be supported by consumers with the passage of time. In conclusion, many citizens have been following advertisements to buy their needs with getting better prices and qualities, while others attempt to ignore them because viewers think they are boring. I think advertisements still play a crucial role and have a considerable influence on buying products

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 claim that customer’ attitude can be highly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
affected
 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhibitannouncementnoticeliteraturepublicitypublication
advertisements
 to choose and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
; however
, it does not appeal and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 sense to a majority of individuals This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of repetition.  Besides
, they are focusing on subjects related to the health issues or prices of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
.

Most international and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 brands have been using advertising to achieve enormous amount of clients and obviously
 more financial profit, although it may not work as a great impression on This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :neglect
ignore
 it. For example
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 humans do not pay attention to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhibitannouncementnoticeliteraturepublicitypublication
advertisements
 which are played
 either between TV programs.

Despite this view, I firmly
 believe that advertising can be effective both mentally and emotionally
. For instance
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 individuals following everything related to lead a healthy life. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, if a care health product publishes an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhibitannouncementnoticeliteraturepublicitypublication
advertisement
 which has adequate information about effective and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 consequence on physical well-being, it probably
 would be supported
 by consumers with the passage of time.

In conclusion
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 citizens have been following You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhibitannouncementnoticeliteraturepublicitypublication
advertisements
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 their needs with getting better prices and qualities, while others attempt to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :neglect
ignore
 them This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 viewers This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 they are boring. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhibitannouncementnoticeliteraturepublicitypublication
advertisements
still
 play a crucial role and have a considerable influence on buying Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphproducts.products!products?products:products,products;
products