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Some people believe that visual images (such as photos and videos) provide enough evidence that a crime was committed. Others think that they are not enough on their own and other evidence is needed. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that visual images (such as photos and videos) provide enough evidence that a crime was committed. Others think that they are not enough on their own and other evidence is needed. jNQM
The most concern in recent days is about crime. The rate of crime is increasing day by day around the world. Few people consider that visual evidence is enough to prove the committed crime, while few people oppose it, as they ought that those are produced by morphing. In this essay, I will provide my views with relevant explanations. Firstly, Due to the advancement of technology, many new devices came into existence for the safety of human-kind. These devices help us to protect ourselves from thieves. For example, if an alarm is placed at the entrance door of the house. An Individual needs to enter the pin to enter into the home. If the person enters the pin wrong, an alarm system will be activated and the image of the person will be sent to the owner of the house.
The most concern in recent days is about crime. The rate of crime is increasing day by day around the world. Few
people
consider that visual evidence is
enough
to prove the committed crime, while few
people
oppose it, as they ought that those
are produced
by morphing. In this essay, I will provide my views with relevant explanations.

Firstly
, Due to the advancement of technology,
many
new devices came into existence for the safety of human-kind. These devices
help
us to protect ourselves from thieves.
For example
, if an alarm
is placed
at the entrance door of the
house
. An Individual needs to enter the pin to enter into the home. If the person enters the pin
wrong
, an alarm system will
be activated
and the image of the person will be
sent
to the owner of the
house
.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that visual images (such as photos and videos) provide enough evidence that a crime was committed. Others think that they are not enough on their own and other evidence is needed.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
140 words
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