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Some people believe that unpaid communityrity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that unpaid communityrity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). AjaB3
In recent years, there has been a growing popularity of volunteer campaigns in high schools. While it is argued by many that these free community service should be compulsory for high school students for the sake of self-development and good society, there still some agruments against this issue. Overall, it is my personal view that high school students should be forced to participate in these activities. First of all, it is an indisputable fact that these volunteer activitiies is extremly beneficSome people believe that unpaid communityrity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports t. . .
In recent years, there has been a growing popularity of volunteer campaigns in high schools. While it
is argued
by
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that these free community service should be compulsory for high school students for the sake of self-development and
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good
society, there
still
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agruments
against this issue.
Overall
, it is my personal view that high school students should
be forced
to participate in these activities.

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activitiies
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beneficSome
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communityrity
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IELTS essay Some people believe that unpaid communityrity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).

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95 words
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