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??Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for a pleasure some people believe this travel has a negative impact on the country's travel to to what extent do you agree or disagree

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. Presently, many people are requested to abroad for different purposes as for pleasure researching for working. however, some people find that if he has a detrimental impact on the Nation's travel to I disagree with the given statement too because the people visit your way as they make good morning between two Nations. , firstly student visit for the nation to get a good politician has built a chance to learn new languages as well as culture, for example, they spent a lot of money when they migrated to one country to another Nation to learn something new they also follow the rules and regulations which are followed by a people who are citizens as they fulfill their water nature when the visit other Nations we do part-time work as
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Presently
,
many
people
are requested
to abroad for
different
purposes as for pleasure researching for working.
however
,
some
people
find that if he has a detrimental impact on the Nation's travel to I disagree with the
given
statement too
because
the
people
visit your way as they
make
good
morning between two
Nations
.
,
firstly
student visit for the
nation
to
get
a
good
politician has built a chance to learn new languages
as well
as culture,
for example
, they spent
a lot of
money when they migrated to one country to another
Nation
to learn something new they
also
follow the
rules
and regulations which
are followed
by a
people
who are citizens as they fulfill their water nature when the visit other
Nations
we do part-time work as
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IELTS essay ? ? Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for a pleasure some people believe this travel has a negative impact on the country's travel to

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
130 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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