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??Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for a pleasure some people believe this travel has a negative impact on the country's travel to to what extent do you agree or disagree

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. Presently, many people are requested to abroad for different purposes as for pleasure researching for working. however, some people find that if he has a detrimental impact on the Nation's travel to I disagree with the given statement too because the people visit your way as they make good morning between two Nations. , firstly student visit for the nation to get a good politician has built a chance to learn new languages as well as culture, for example, they spent a lot of money when they migrated to one country to another Nation to learn something new they also follow the rules and regulations which are followed by a people who are citizens as they fulfill their water nature when the visit other Nations we do part-time work as
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IELTS essay ? ? Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for a pleasure some people believe this travel has a negative impact on the country's travel to

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  American English
1 paragraphs
130 words
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