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Modern education has to eliminate grading systems. Do you agree or disagree? or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teacher be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Modern education has to eliminate grading systems. or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teacher be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children? yNdN3
A good number of academicians feel that grading system should be wiped out from modern education. For some specific inclinations, I completely disagree with this statement. This essay aims to discuss this issue from broad spectrum of perspectives. First and foremost, without grading system, students' proper evaluation would not be possible. In addition, exam and grading help to identify the weakness of a learner and teacher can select an ideal methodology for the weak students. Hence, they can improve their week points at the early stage. For example, many high schools in Bangladesh arrange incentive care unit for week students before their public examinations which is arranged by evaluating their previous exam results. On the other hand, we can not ignore the contradicting perspective of those on the other side of the aisle. A sizable portion of the educationalists feel that grading system has a negative impact in students mind. Sometimes youngsters may feel inferiority complex which demotivate them to study regularly. Furthermore, many students when they feel they are not good at any subject, they would not like to attend the class. As a result, they try to give up their study. To illustrate, Indian Times published a report where it has been shown that 20% of high school students of Asian countries dropped- out due to their poor grade in final exam. In conclution, considering the aforementioned aspects, it is plausible to state that despite having a few disadvantagese, evaluation and grading system is essential for the proper guidance of the young pupils. Without a proper grading system, educational institute would not be able to ensure the improvement of the week students.
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modern
education. For
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some
specific inclinations, I completely disagree with
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statement
. This essay aims to discuss this issue from broad spectrum of perspectives.

First
and foremost, without
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grading
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system
, students' proper evaluation would not be

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possible
.
In addition
, exam and
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grading
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help
to identify the weakness of a learner
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and


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teacher
can select an ideal methodology for the weak
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students
.
Hence
, they can

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improve
their week points at the early stage.
For example
,
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many
high schools
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in


Bangladesh
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incentive care unit for week
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students
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before
their public

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examinations
which
is arranged
by evaluating their previous exam results.

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, we can not
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ignore
the contradicting perspective of those on the other

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side
of the aisle. A sizable portion of the educationalists feel that
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grading
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system
has
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a


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negative
impact in
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students
mind.
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Sometimes
youngsters may feel inferiority
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complex


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which
demotivate them to study
regularly
.
Furthermore
,
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many
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students
when they feel

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they
are not
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good
at any subject, they would not like to attend the
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class
.
As a result
,

they try to give up their study. To illustrate, Indian Times published a report where
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it


has
been shown
that 20% of high school
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students
of Asian countries dropped- out due

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to
their poor grade in final exam.

In
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conclution
, considering the aforementioned aspects, it is plausible to state that

despite having a few
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disadvantagese
, evaluation and
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grading
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system
is essential for the

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proper
guidance of the young pupils. Without a proper
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grading
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system
,
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educational


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institute
would not be able to ensure the improvement of the week
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students
.
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IELTS essay Modern education has to eliminate grading systems. or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teacher be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

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